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2015-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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Remember: the Present Perfect is used for unfinished time, the Past Simple for finished time. 1. The Bank opened a branch in the new shopping center last month. 2. The bus is late and Julie is cold. She has waited for 10 minutes. 3. Caroline worked here between 2003 and 2006. 4. Before boarding, John bought a book to read during the flight. 5. So far today, I have learned several new words in English. (2) Flying Broomsticks Do you remember the sports ‘Quidditch’? Brooms in Harry Potter world are largely used only for flying, but also for sports. We dreams of flying to the sky. If we have this one, we can fly to the sky, and move fast. Even if we miss the subway or bus, we don't need to worry to be late at class. Let me show you a short quidditch playing video. ->This is the rest of my script part! >_< I hope you see you on Monday. Have a nice weekend~

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday [이름], How was your weekend? I hope that you had a great one. Thanks for accomplishing your homework too. You were so diligent. Keep it up. I hope that you will take note of the corrections and learn from them. See you later! I miss you!   Teacher Carmen ^^   Remember: the Present Perfect is used for unfinished time, the Past Simple for finished time.1. The Bank opened a branch in the new shopping center last month.>> CORRECT! 2. The bus is late and Julie is cold. She has waited for 10 minutes.>> has been waiting 3. Caroline worked here between 2003 and 2006. >> CORRECT!4. Before boarding, John bought a book to read during the flight. >> CORRECT!5. So far today, I have learned several new words in English. >> CORRECT!(2) Flying Broomsticks Do you remember the sports ‘Quidditch’? >> Do you remember the sport, \"Quidditch\"?   Brooms in Harry Potter world are largely used only for flying, but also for sports. >> The brooms in Hogwarts are mostly used not only for flying but also for sports.   We dreams of flying to the sky. >> We have always dreamt of flying.   If we have this one, we can fly to the sky, and move fast. >> If we have this broom, we can fly and move fast.   Even if we miss the subway or bus, we don\'t need to worry to be late at class. >> If we missed the subway or bus, we don\'t even need to worry about being late in class.   Let me show you a short quidditch playing video. >> Let me show you a short video about Quidditch. ->This is the rest of my script part! >_< >> This is the rest of the script.   I hope you see you on Monday. >> I hope to see you on Monday.   Have a nice weekend~ >> CORRECT!  

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