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When I pass a bridge near my house sometimes I‘ve used to imagine existence of something.
The river is not that dirty and clean but I thought a monster. What I’m trying to say seems to have an ugly face like an ugly fish. You might guess from what I mentioned. It is a little petite but looks ugly fish. The skin is like a frog and it doesn’t have legs by the way. It leaves in the river which is located behind my apartment. This monster usually eats small fishes, garbage and something dirty in the river. That won’t afflict others however it has possibility of evolution. If environment has been getting worse continuously it might bring the problem in ecosystem. Since I really don’t like fish eye I don’t want to see this monster even in my dream.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! ^^
Thank you for your tall tale about what lives under the bridge near your home. ^^
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
When I pass a bridge near my house sometimes I‘ve used to imagine existence of something. The river is not that dirty and clean but I thought a monster.
>> Whenever I pass over a river that is neither too dirty nor clean using the bridge near my house, I sometimes imagine the existence of some kind of monster.
What I’m trying to say seems to have an ugly face like an ugly fish. You might guess from what I mentioned. It is a little petite but looks ugly fish. The skin is like a frog and it doesn’t have legs by the way.
>> What I\'m saying is this monster is quite petite, has a face like an ugly fish, it\'s skin is like a frog\'s and by the way, it doesn\'t have any legs either.
It leaves in the river which is located behind my apartment. This monster usually eats small fishes, garbage and something dirty in the river. That won’t afflict others however it has possibility of evolution.
>> It lives in the river which is behind my apartment. Now this monster feeds on small fishes, garbage and anything found in the river. This doesn\'t affect anyone however it could mean a possibility of evolution.
If environment has been getting worse continuously it might bring the problem in ecosystem. Since I really don’t like fish eye I don’t want to see this monster even in my dream.
>> If the environmental pollution continuously gets worse, it might unbalance the ecosystem and since I really don\'t like how fish\'s eyes look like, I do not want to see this monster; not even in my dreams.
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