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Hi there [이름]! Good morning to you! Hope your Monday was not that too tough. Anyway, I totally agree with what you have shared.
We regret not doing something in the past but we so no have to sulk and be sad because we did not do it. We just need to enjoy what we have in present and make ourselves better so we can totally say that we are living a happy life. There should be no more regrets.
I\'ll hear from you this afternoon! Enjoy the rest of the day! ^^
Always,
Kathrine ^^
There is a well-known phrase in Korea that \"If I had known these that I know now\".
>> There is a well-known phrase in Korea that \"If I had known what I know now.\".
There are some moments that I sometimes imagine to returned to.
>> There are some moments when I sometimes imagine I could go back in time.
Mostly it is accopanied with regrets.
>> Mostly, it is accompanied with regrets.
Those are different from teenagers to few years, even few months ago but essentially based on same emotion and thought.
>> It is different to those who are younger than a few years or a few months but it is essentially based from the same emotion and thought.
Why I couldn\'t be more engaged to my life?
>> correct!
Why I was so scared of adventure at my younger ages?
>> Why I was so scared of going to an adventure during my younger days?
I still have these things so far, even though I\'m alomot passing by 1st half of my life.
>> I still have these things so far even though I am almost passing by the half of my life.
But I can\'t no more allow my life is conquered by regret or any other negative feelings.
>> But I can\'t allow myself to be conquered with regrets or any other negative feelings.
To do so, I should set ideal and feasible goal, and steadily go in every day.
>> To be able to do so, I should set an ideal and a feasible goal, and steadily go with it every day.
Yes, Power English one of actions that I\'ve taken as a part of the purpose :)
>> Yes, Power English is one of the actions that I\'ve taken as a part of that purpose :)
I believe that immersion and small achivement in daily life is the key to keep myself healthy and constructive.
>> I believe that immersion and small achievement in my daily life is the key to keep myself healthy and constructive.
When we become to just enjoy present and no more miss old days, we can say it is really happy life.
>> When we become happy while enjoying the present and not missing the past, we can say that it is really a happy life.
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