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2015-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

I prefer exciting life. Frequently changing life is so interesting. Society is circulated. So we should find extraordinary stuff in our lives. It can refresh our feeling. Same lives are very boring. As our tough work or study, we are exausted so we should relieve our stress. Therefore I prefer changing life.

강사 첨삭

Oh you are a spontaneous type of person!

I love that!

Thanks for doing your homework.

I prefer exciting life.

>>I prefer to live an exciting life.
Frequently changing life is so interesting.

>>A frequently changing lifestyle.
Society is circulated. So we should find extraordinary stuff in our lives.

>>Society circulates, so we should find extraordinary stuff in our lives.
It can refresh our feeling.

>>CORRECT!
Same lives are very boring.

>>A life with a routine is very boring.

As our tough work or study, we are exausted so we should relieve our stress.

>>We get exhausted so we should relieve our stress from our tough work or studies.
Therefore I prefer changing life.

>>Therefore I prefer a different lifestyle.

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