HOMEWORK
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what is one thing you fear the most and why?
There are many things that I fear like drakness, ghost, thieves and so on..
However, mostly I am feared with challenging new things...
It is hard to start because I am afraid that if i fail with it..
This fear is getting serious as I am oldder..
I think...I am losing my confidence...because there are many young and smart
people around me...It sounds sad..but I won't give up..
I will try to do my best to overcomethis fear until I die...^^
1. By the time I got to the hotel, there hadn't been any rooms left. (to be)
2. I was afraid to ask her out because she had rejected me before. (to reject)
3. I have been listening to music when she came in. (to listen)
4.P1: What have you been doing?
P2: I have been working a lot. (to work)
a) have worked b) worked c)
5. Last night I have dreamed that I was living in France.(to dream)
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름]!
I understand your fear. I sometimes feel that way too.
But then, remember though the young ones may appear smart to you, you have something they don\'t have.
And that is experience and wisdom.
I remember you said before that you don\'t consider yourself as a wise person, but you are.
Just learn to believe in yourself and stay positive. ^^;
See you later! ~^^~
Teacher Anne
There are many things that I fear like drakness, ghost, thieves and so on..
>> Correct! [darkness]However, mostly I am feared with challenging new things...
>> However, mostly, I fear challenging new things.It is hard to start because I am afraid that if i fail with it..
>> It is hard to start because I am afraid of failing.This fear is getting serious as I am oldder..
>> This fear is getting more serious as I get older.I think...I am losing my confidence...because there are many young and smart people around me...
>> Correct!
It sounds sad..but I won\'t give up..
>> Correct! I will try to do my best to overcomethis fear until I die...^^ >> Correct! [overcome this]1. By the time I got to the hotel, there hadn\'t been any rooms left. (to be)>> By the time I got to the hotel, there weren\'t any rooms left.
2. I was afraid to ask her out because she had rejected me before. (to reject)
>> Correct! 3. I have been listening to music when she came in. (to listen)
>> I was listening to music when she came in.4.P1: What have you been doing?P2: I have been working a lot. (to work)
>> Correct! 5. Last night I have dreamed that I was living in France.(to dream)
>> Last night, I dreamt that I was living in France.
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