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2015-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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what is one thing you fear the most and why? There are many things that I fear like drakness, ghost, thieves and so on.. However, mostly I am feared with challenging new things... It is hard to start because I am afraid that if i fail with it.. This fear is getting serious as I am oldder.. I think...I am losing my confidence...because there are many young and smart people around me...It sounds sad..but I won't give up.. I will try to do my best to overcomethis fear until I die...^^ 1. By the time I got to the hotel, there hadn't been any rooms left. (to be) 2. I was afraid to ask her out because she had rejected me before. (to reject) 3. I have been listening to music when she came in. (to listen) 4.P1: What have you been doing? P2: I have been working a lot. (to work) a) have worked b) worked c) 5. Last night I have dreamed that I was living in France.(to dream)

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Hi Miss [이름]! I understand your fear. I sometimes feel that way too. But then, remember though the young ones may appear smart to you, you have something they don\'t have. And that is experience and wisdom. I remember you said before that you don\'t consider yourself as a wise person, but you are. Just learn to believe in yourself and stay positive. ^^; See you later! ~^^~ Teacher Anne   There are many things that I fear like drakness, ghost, thieves and so on.. >> Correct! [darkness]However, mostly I am feared with challenging new things... >> However, mostly, I fear challenging new things.It is hard to start because I am afraid that if i fail with it.. >> It is hard to start because I am afraid of failing.This fear is getting serious as I am oldder.. >> This fear is getting more serious as I get older.I think...I am losing my confidence...because there are many young and smart people around me... >> Correct! It sounds sad..but I won\'t give up.. >> Correct! I will try to do my best to overcomethis fear until I die...^^ >> Correct! [overcome this]1. By the time I got to the hotel, there hadn\'t been any rooms left. (to be)>> By the time I got to the hotel, there weren\'t any rooms left. 2. I was afraid to ask her out because she had rejected me before. (to reject) >> Correct! 3. I have been listening to music when she came in. (to listen) >> I was listening to music when she came in.4.P1: What have you been doing?P2: I have been working a lot. (to work) >> Correct! 5. Last night I have dreamed that I was living in France.(to dream) >> Last night, I dreamt that I was living in France.

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