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2015-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Good evening, teacher. My mother-in-law called me this afternoon. She told me that she wants to make [이름]chi for the winter tomorrow. You know, I have to finish my essay until this Friday. But, I couldn't tell her that I can't do that. T.T So, I will go to my mother-in-law's house tomorrow to make [이름]chi. Anyway, see you on Monday. Complete the sentence below. Explain your answer in three sentences. If I could do an extreme sport (skydiving, bungee jumping, surfing), I would do ______. As I told you before, I don't enjoy any extreme sports. I am timid and fearful about extreme sports such as skydiving, bungee jumping. You probably might remember that I was surprised when you told me that you tried to do some extreme sports. But, in case of surfing, I guess it will be alright. Above all, it seems like not too dangerous.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! That\'s the thing about your culture. As a daughter-in-law, you are at your mother-in-law\'s beck and call. Anyway, try to enjoy it! Thanks for doing your homework. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good evening, teacher. >> CORRECT! My mother-in-law called me this afternoon. >> CORRECT! She told me that she wants to make [이름]chi for the winter tomorrow. >> CORRECT! You know, I have to finish my essay until this Friday. >> CORRECT! But, I couldn\'t tell her that I can\'t do that. T.T >> CORRECT! So, I will go to my mother-in-law\'s house tomorrow to make [이름]chi. >> CORRECT! Anyway, see you on Monday. >> CORRECT! As I told you before, I don\'t enjoy any extreme sports. >> CORRECT! I am timid and fearful about extreme sports such as skydiving and bungee jumping. >> CORRECT! You probably might remember that I was surprised when you told me that you tried to do some extreme sports. >> CORRECT! But, in case of surfing, I guess it will be alright. >> However, I think surfing is alright.Above all, it seems like not too dangerous. >> Out of all the extreme sports, I think it\'s not too dangerous.

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