Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening, teacher.
My mother-in-law called me this afternoon.
She told me that she wants to make [이름]chi for the winter tomorrow.
You know, I have to finish my essay until this Friday.
But, I couldn't tell her that I can't do that. T.T
So, I will go to my mother-in-law's house tomorrow to make [이름]chi.
Anyway, see you on Monday.
Complete the sentence below. Explain your answer in three sentences.
If I could do an extreme sport (skydiving, bungee jumping, surfing), I would do ______.
As I told you before, I don't enjoy any extreme sports.
I am timid and fearful about extreme sports such as skydiving, bungee jumping.
You probably might remember that I was surprised when you told me that you tried to do some extreme sports.
But, in case of surfing, I guess it will be alright.
Above all, it seems like not too dangerous.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! That\'s the thing about your culture. As a daughter-in-law, you are at your mother-in-law\'s beck and call. Anyway, try to enjoy it!
Thanks for doing your homework.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Good evening, teacher.
>> CORRECT! My mother-in-law called me this afternoon.
>> CORRECT! She told me that she wants to make [이름]chi for the winter tomorrow.
>> CORRECT! You know, I have to finish my essay until this Friday.
>> CORRECT! But, I couldn\'t tell her that I can\'t do that. T.T
>> CORRECT! So, I will go to my mother-in-law\'s house tomorrow to make [이름]chi.
>> CORRECT! Anyway, see you on Monday.
>> CORRECT! As I told you before, I don\'t enjoy any extreme sports.
>> CORRECT! I am timid and fearful about extreme sports such as skydiving and bungee jumping.
>> CORRECT! You probably might remember that I was surprised when you told me that you tried to do some extreme sports.
>> CORRECT! But, in case of surfing, I guess it will be alright.
>> However, I think surfing is alright.Above all, it seems like not too dangerous.
>> Out of all the extreme sports, I think it\'s not too dangerous.
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