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2015-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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If I could go back anywhen or anywhere I would go at this time two years ago. At that time I had a boyfriend and spent great time with him but a little later, we broke up because of his period of lassitude. I often imagine the situation of that time since he has gotten in touch until a recent date. If I asked him to keep going out continously how long were we meet more? were we better than before? I know it's an idle thoughts however sometimes I wonder. Moreover I didn't hear his thoughts of that time. So I would like to go back that moment to hear his sincereness.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! ^^   Thank you for your essay about the composition topic about going anywhere and anywhen. ^^ See you in class!   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     If I could go back anywhen or anywhere I would go at this time two years ago.>> If I could go back anywhere and anywhen, I would go back two years ago,at around this time.   At that time I had a boyfriend and spent great time with him but a little later, we broke up because of his period of lassitude. >> I had a boyfriend then and we had a great time together but a little while later, we broke up because of his lassitudinous behavior.    I often imagine the situation of that time since he has gotten in touch until a recent date. If I asked him to keep going out continously how long were we meet more? were we better than before? >> I often imagined situations where I would ask him that if we were to continue going out, how long would it be and were we better than before since he had gotten in touch with me recently. I know it\'s an idle thoughts however sometimes I wonder. Moreover I didn\'t hear his thoughts of that time. So I would like to go back that moment to hear his sincereness. >> I know these are idle thoughts but I sometimes wonder. Even more, I didn\'t hear him out at that time so I would like to go back to that moment to hear his sincerity.

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