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2015-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I want to travel universe in the future. It's my dream. Someone may say it's impossible but more than 30 years later, I believe I can travel universe by getting a space shuttle. I'm interested in stars so I like to see sky at night to see beautiful stars. Therefore I want to see those beautiful stars in the space.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for doing your homework, Adam!

There\'s nothing more interesting that traveling the universe~

I want to travel universe in the future.

>>I want to travel universe the in the future.
It\'s my dream.

>>CORRECT!

Someone may say it\'s impossible but more than 30 years later, I believe I can travel universe by getting a space shuttle.

>>Someone may say it\'s impossible but 30 years later, I believe I can do it by getting a space shuttle.
I\'m interested in stars so I like to see sky at night to see beautiful stars.

>> I\'m interested in stars so I like to see the sky at night to see beautiful stars.

Therefore I want to see those beautiful stars in the space.

>>CORRECT!

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