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2015-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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<What usually makes you feel and think negatively?> There are two things to make me feel and think negitively. First, Comparing myself with others can make me so annoyed. When I was a student(from high shcool to university school), my most of results of tests were good. I thought "I am relatively smart and clever". I was confident. But now, except for me, all my friends already have their own job or studying like a marster's dgree. Sometimes I am dissappointed about my life. Second of all, some people who ignore me very rudely make me upset. If I confronted some rude people at school, I could avoid them. That's all. But after graduating, I can' do that at work places such as company, part time job.. Even they act so badely, I should endure their behavior. I really wanna kill them!!!!! ........no just kidding kkk Anyway, these are my ideas about your question.

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dearest [이름]! You woke up early today I am sure of that. kkkk

Anyway, I also hate being compared to others because I feel more insecure about myself. I feel like I am so dumb because the other person has a higher status than me. Uggghhh!! Hate that feeling.

And with those rude people, just let them be. I know deep inside you really want to kill them(we have the same feeling) but we could not do so. So we just need a lot of patience. kkkk

I\'ll talk to you later! ^^ Enjoy your day!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


<What usually makes you feel and think negatively?>

 There are two things to make me feel and think negitively.
>> 
 There are two things which make me feel and think negatively.
First, Comparing myself with others can make me so annoyed.
>> 
First, comparing myself to others can make me so annoyed.
When I was a student(from high shcool to university school), my most of results of tests were good.

>> When I was a student, from high school up to the university, most of my test results were good.

I thought \"I am relatively smart and clever\".

>> correct!

I was confident.
>> 
correct! 
But now, except for me, all my friends already have their own job or studying like a marster\'s dgree.

>> But now, all my friends already have their own job or they are studying for their Master\'s Degree.

Sometimes I am dissappointed about my life.
>> 
correct!  
Second of all, some people who ignore me very rudely make me upset.
>> correct!

>> or: Second of all, some people who rudely ignore me make me feel upset.
If I confronted some rude people at school, I could avoid them. That\'s all.
>> 
correct! 
But after graduating, I can\' do that at work places such as company, part time job..
>> 
But after graduating, I can\'t do that at the workplace such as in the company, or at the part time job..
Even they act so badely, I should endure their behavior.
>> 
correct!  (badly)
I really wanna kill them!!!!! ........no just kidding kkk
>> 
correct! 
Anyway, these are my ideas about your question.

>> Anyway, these are my ideas to your question.

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