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Hello there my dearest [이름]! You woke up early today I am sure of that. kkkk
Anyway, I also hate being compared to others because I feel more insecure about myself. I feel like I am so dumb because the other person has a higher status than me. Uggghhh!! Hate that feeling.
And with those rude people, just let them be. I know deep inside you really want to kill them(we have the same feeling) but we could not do so. So we just need a lot of patience. kkkk
I\'ll talk to you later! ^^ Enjoy your day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
<What usually makes you feel and think negatively?>
There are two things to make me feel and think negitively.
>> There are two things which make me feel and think negatively.
First, Comparing myself with others can make me so annoyed.
>> First, comparing myself to others can make me so annoyed.
When I was a student(from high shcool to university school), my most of results of tests were good.
>> When I was a student, from high school up to the university, most of my test results were good.
I thought \"I am relatively smart and clever\".
>> correct!
I was confident.
>> correct!
But now, except for me, all my friends already have their own job or studying like a marster\'s dgree.
>> But now, all my friends already have their own job or they are studying for their Master\'s Degree.
Sometimes I am dissappointed about my life.
>> correct!
Second of all, some people who ignore me very rudely make me upset.
>> correct!
>> or: Second of all, some people who rudely ignore me make me feel upset.
If I confronted some rude people at school, I could avoid them. That\'s all.
>> correct!
But after graduating, I can\' do that at work places such as company, part time job..
>> But after graduating, I can\'t do that at the workplace such as in the company, or at the part time job..
Even they act so badely, I should endure their behavior.
>> correct! (badly)
I really wanna kill them!!!!! ........no just kidding kkk
>> correct!
Anyway, these are my ideas about your question.
>> Anyway, these are my ideas to your question.
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