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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Whew, the words are impressive!
Keep it up, Adam!
I think I am a responsible person.
>>CORRECT!
I think reponsibility is the most important feature these days.
>>CORRECT!
Once I am assigned any task, I don\'t want to do anything before finishing my task because other thing would disturb my task.
>> Once I am assigned to do any task, I don\'t want to do anything before having it finished because another thing would disturb it.
Also my mother emphasize responsibility.
>>My mother also emphasizes responsibility.
When I was young, I hadn\'t completed my study then my mother yelled at me because we wanted that I am a responsible person.
>>When I was young, I hadn\'t completed my study then my mother yelled at me because she wanted me to be a responsible person.
Therefore I have grown as a responsible person.
>>CORRECT!
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