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Hi Miss [이름]!
Indeed! A challenge can be an opportunity to grow if we are willing to take it.
We don\'t usually notice changes within ourselves until someone points it out. ^^;
Sometimes, I find it hard to believe when someone says \"You\'ve changed.\"
But then, at the end of the day, I am mostly glad I changed.
Otherwise, life would be boring. ^^;
Have a nice day!
Teacher Anne
I agree with it.
>> Correct!
Facing challenges improves ourselves.
>> Facing challenges will help us improve ourselves.
Trying new things are hard but we can always have some lessons through them eventhoght it is not always good.
>> Trying new things are hard, but we can always have some lessons through them even though it is not always good.
My family told me that I have changed alot after becoming a teacher like being diligent and organized..
>> My family told me that I have changed a lot after becoming a teacher, like being diligent and organized.
1. I was taking a shower when you called.
>> Correct!
2. My brotherhad never been to Europe until he went there last year.
>> Correct! [brother had]
3. Diane has felt very sick but she decided to go out anyway.
>> Correct!
4. He has called her all night.
>> He was calling her all night.
5. I wanted to go swimming but the water was too cold.
>> Correct!
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