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2015-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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I agree with it. Facing challenges improves ourselves. Trying new things are hard but we can always have some lessons through them eventhoght it is not always good. My family told me that I have changed alot after becoming a teacher like being diligent and organized.. 1. I was taking a shower when you called. 2. My brotherhad never been to Europe until he went there last year. 3. Diane has felt very sick but she decided to go out anyway. 4. He has called her all night. 5. I wanted to go swimming but the water was too cold.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

Indeed! A challenge can be an opportunity to grow if we are willing to take it.

We don\'t usually notice changes within ourselves until someone points it out. ^^;

Sometimes, I find it hard to believe when someone says \"You\'ve changed.\"

But then, at the end of the day, I am mostly glad I changed.

Otherwise, life would be boring. ^^;

Have a nice day!

Teacher Anne

 

I agree with it.

>> Correct!

Facing challenges improves ourselves.

>> Facing challenges will help us improve ourselves.
Trying new things are hard but we can always have some lessons through them eventhoght it is not always good.

>> Trying new things are hard, but we can always have some lessons through them even though it is not always good.

My family told me that I have changed alot after becoming a teacher like being diligent and organized..

>> My family told me that I have changed a lot after becoming a teacher, like being diligent and organized.
1. I was taking a shower when you called.
>> Correct!

2. My brotherhad never been to Europe until he went there last year.
>> Correct! [brother had]
3. Diane has felt very sick but she decided to go out anyway.
>> Correct!
4. He has called her all night.
>> He was calling her all night.
5. I wanted to go swimming but the water was too cold.

>> Correct!

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