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2015-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Wow~It is really a good idea.. In my case , I want to enforce a death penalty system in Korea.. I know that the sound is really strong.. But Not for everybody...the peole who kill others should have a death penalty.. There are lots of murdering in Korea.. that is why we need a strong penalty for it.. hehe it is too serious..sorry..^^; 1. This restaurant is famous for its salads. 2. George is married with a German woman. 3. Are you afraid of him? 4. I'm so proud of you! 5. We're not associated with that company.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

I understand how you feel.

Sometimes, when I think of some cases that has affected me, I wish for death penalty as well.

My hometown has been greatly affected by a big issue this year,

and almost all of us wished for death penalty and revenge to those who wronged our people.

I guess justice is really difficult to achieve in this world.

But then we all continue to try to achieve justice for everyone.

Thanks for sharing, Miss [이름]!

See you!

Teacher Anne

 

Wow~It is really a good idea..

>> Correct!
In my case , I want to enforce a death penalty system in Korea..

>> Correct!

I know that the sound is really strong..

>> I know it sounds really harsh.
But Not for everybody...the peole who kill others should have a death penalty..

>> But it won\'t be enforced to everybody. The people who killed others should receive death penalty.
There are lots of murdering in Korea.. that is why we need a strong penalty for it..

>> There are many murder cases in Korea, that is why we need a strong penalty for it.
hehe it is too serious..sorry..^^;

>> Correct! [Hehe]
1. This restaurant is famous for its salads.
>> Correct!
2. George is married with a German woman.
>> George is married to a German woman.
3. Are you afraid of him?
>> Correct!
4. I\'m so proud of you!
>> Correct!
5. We\'re not associated with that company.

>> Correct!

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