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2015-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hello!! We are tought by a black and white..but it s hard to say in that way. Saying a lie is like that. I realized that sometimes we need to say a lie.. There is a saying ignorance is bliss.. If the doctor said to the patient who can live for only 1 month "You would live for 1 month.." Maybe he will die earies than that day but if the patient doesn't know abot it, he could live more that 1month..then what can the doctor say, the t[이름] or not..? I believe that telling the t[이름] is good..but not always..we need to be flexible on the situations...*^^* 1. I'm really annoyed with one of my coworkers. 2. The city was damaged during the storm. 3. The information was quite damagingto his reputation. 4. I was amused by the way she acted. 5. Do you find this type of humor amusing?

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Hi, Miss [이름]! Your explanation is interesting. Indeed, white lies are sometimes necessary. It is, in my experience hard to judge things through black and white. Some deeds seem wrong, but when they are done with noble intentions, and for seemingly right reasons, it becomes difficult to judge. See you later, Miss [이름]! Stay happy! Teacher Anne   We are tought by a black and white..but it s hard to say in that way. >> We are taught to judge or see things in black and white, but it is hard to say it that way.Saying a lie is like that. I realized that sometimes we need to say a lie.. >> Correct!There is a saying ignorance is bliss.. >> There is a saying that goes, \"Ignorance is bliss\".If the doctor said to the patient who can live for only 1 month \"You would live for 1 month..\" >> If a doctor tells his patient who has only one month left to live, \"You will only live for 1 month.\"  Maybe he will die earies than that day >> Maybe he will die earlier than expected.  but if the patient doesn\'t know abot it, he could live more that 1month..then what can the doctor say, the t[이름] or not..? >> But if the patient doesn\'t know about it, he might live for more than a month. Then should the doctor tell the t[이름] or not?I believe that telling the t[이름] is good..but not always.. >> Correct! we need to be flexible on the situations...*^^* >> We need to be flexible, depending on the situations. *^^*1. I\'m really annoyed with one of my coworkers. >> Correct!2. The city was damaged during the storm. >> Correct!3. The information was quite damagingto his reputation. >> Correct! [damaging to]4. I was amused by the way she acted. >> Correct!5. Do you find this type of humor amusing? >> Correct!

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