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2015-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. It's long time no see, right? I didn't realize that 10 minutes was over in today's class. I stammered much today. I guess it's been a long time to speak English.^^ I wish I would be better tomorrow. You find a book and begin to read only to discover that it is your life. You get to the point that you are at now, do you turn the page knowing that you will not be able to change the events to come? I think it's hard not to be seduced. However, I'd like not to turn the page. It's because that I want to live my life on my own free will. If I know my future, my own will and decision wouldn't mean anything. Therefore, I would choose not to turn the page although I really wonder how and about my rest life.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! I missed you so much! Thanks for coming back. :) It\'s okay if you stammered a bit today. That\'s pretty understandable. I\'m sure you\'ll be able to speak fluently again starting tomorrow. You just need more practice.  Thanks for doing your homework! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! It\'s long time no see, right? >> Long time no see, right?I didn\'t realize that 10 minutes was over in today\'s class. >> I didn\'t realize that our 10 minutes was over today.I stammered much today. >> I stammered a lot today.I guess it\'s been a long time to speak English.^^ >> I guess it\'s because I haven\'t spoken English in a long time.I wish I would be better tomorrow. >> CORRECT! I think it\'s hard not to be seduced. >> CORRECT! However, I\'d like not to turn the page. >> However, I would not turn the page.It\'s because that I want to live my life on my own free will. >> It\'s because I want to live my life on my own free will.If I know my future, my own will and decision wouldn\'t mean anything. >> CORRECT! Therefore, I would choose not to turn the page although I really wonder how and about my rest life. >> Therefore, I would choose not to turn the page, although I\'m really wondering about the rest of my life.

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