homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My moral in my life is to be diligent.
No one is to live instead of my life.
Do your best in your life not to have regret.
All about these are very normal expressions.
But I always remind me to keep these.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Nice job!!!An education that cannot do its work in a free mind, and so must teach by homily and precept in the service of these feelings and attitudes and beliefs rather than those, is pure and unmistakable tyranny. Have a nice day!!!
T. Jeny
My moral in my life is to be diligent.>>correct
No one is to live instead of my life.
>>I will live my own life.Do your best in your life not to have regret.
>>Do your best in living your life so that you won\'t have any regrets.All about these are very normal expressions.
>>This is a normal expression.But I always remind me to keep these.
>>I always keep this in mind.
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