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2015-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. apple her a the red mother . baby gave 2. baby the the . to apple tried eat 3. his too small was . mouth 4. didn't have he . teeth any and 5. apple brother his the took . mother gave her a baby the red apple the baby tried to eat the apple his mouth was too small and he didn't have nay teeth the brother took his apple

강사 첨삭

Hello Harry! ^.^

Thank you very much for doing your homework.

It\'s nice that you sent me a composition today.

I hope that you are having a great time learning English.

I encourage you to write a lot of things, you can share stories too. ^^

Keep up the good work.

Please go over the corrections below.
See you tomorrow.

Teacher Nina


1. apple her a the red mother . baby gave
2. baby the the . to apple tried eat
3. his too small was . mouth
4. didn\'t have he . teeth any and
5. apple brother his the took .

mother gave her a baby the red apple

>> The mother gave her baby a red apple. 
the baby tried to eat the apple

>> correct ( Don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of your sentence and put a period at the end. ^^)
his mouth was too small

>> correct ( Don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of your sentence and put a period at the end. ^^)
and he didn\'t have nay teeth

>> correct ( Don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of your sentence, put a period at the end and be careful with your spelling, any. ^^)
the brother took his apple

>> His brother took his apple.

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