homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Harry! ^.^
Thank you very much for doing your homework.
It\'s nice that you sent me a composition today.
I hope that you are having a great time learning English.
I encourage you to write a lot of things, you can share stories too. ^^
Keep up the good work.
Please go over the corrections below.
See you tomorrow.
Teacher Nina
1. apple her a the red mother . baby gave
2. baby the the . to apple tried eat
3. his too small was . mouth
4. didn\'t have he . teeth any and
5. apple brother his the took .
mother gave her a baby the red apple
>> The mother gave her baby a red apple.
the baby tried to eat the apple
>> correct ( Don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of your sentence and put a period at the end. ^^)
his mouth was too small
>> correct ( Don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of your sentence and put a period at the end. ^^)
and he didn\'t have nay teeth
>> correct ( Don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of your sentence, put a period at the end and be careful with your spelling, any. ^^)
the brother took his apple
>> His brother took his apple.
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