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2015-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Is taht possible to choose one thing? Wow, this question is like who do you like more mom or dad? It is really hard to choose one..Maybe I could choose money...^^ So that I would buy what I need. I could't live without them. Sometimes, I get scared of using the things like WiFi, electricity, cars, etc. but I am alread relying on them.ㅜㅜ 1. Q: Is that the right answer. A: No, it's a wrong answer. 2. I felt bad in the morning, but now I feel good. 3. This shirt is dirty. Give me a clean shirt. 4. I don't want to spend more time with him. I want to spend less time with him. 5. Q: Do you feel better? A: No, I feel bad!

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Hi Miss [이름]! That was a nice comparison! ^^ It is really like choosing between one\'s parents. But you made a good choice. I saw something on the internet. They proposed that we should add WiFi to our basic needs. Because we really cannot live without it. ^^; See you later! Teacher Anne   Is taht possible to choose one thing? >> Is it possible to choose only one thing? Wow, this question is like who do you like more mom or dad? >> Correct! It is really hard to choose one.. >> Correct! Maybe I could choose money...^^ >> Maybe I would choose money. So that I would buy what I need. I could\'t live without them. >> Correct! [couldn\'t]  Sometimes, I get scared of using the things like WiFi, electricity, cars, etc. but I am alread relying on them.ㅜㅜ>> Correct! [already]1. Q: Is that the right answer. A: No, it\'s a wrong answer.>> Correct!2. I felt bad in the morning, but now I feel good.>> Correct!3. This shirt is dirty. Give me a clean shirt.>> Correct!4. I don\'t want to spend more time with him. I want to spend less time with him.>> Correct!5. Q: Do you feel better? A: No, I feel bad! >>worse

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