Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon, teacher.
I have a class this afternoon.
So, I'm going to school.
See you tomorrow.
Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences.
Would you rather forget who you were or who everyone else was?
I'm sorry but I didn't fully understand this hypothetical question.
Do you mean that if I choose to forget who I was, could everyone recognize me although I couldn't know who I am?
That's terrible and the converse is also terrible.
But if I am forced to choose one of two, I would rather forget who everyone else was.
I believe that my family and friend would try to make me remember them.
I would recover my memories thanks to their efforts.
Compared to forgetting who everyone else was, forgetting who I am is more complicated problem to solve.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Was it a bit confusing? Thanks for trying, though.
I guess I would rather forget everyone else too. There are some parts of myself that I wouldn\'t want to forget.
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Good afternoon, teacher.
>> CORRECT! I have a class this afternoon.
>> CORRECT! So, I\'m going to school.
>> CORRECT! See you tomorrow.
>> CORRECT! I\'m sorry but I didn\'t fully understand this hypothetical question.
>> CORRECT! Do you mean that if I choose to forget who I was, could everyone recognize me although I couldn\'t know who I am?
>> Do you mean that if I choose to forget who I was, everyone could still recognize me although I don\'t know who I am?
That\'s terrible and the converse is also terrible.
>> That\'s terrible and the opposite is the same.
But if I am forced to choose one of two, I would rather forget who everyone else was.
>> CORRECT! I believe that my family and friends would try to make me remember them.
>> CORRECT! I would recover my memories thanks to their efforts.
>> CORRECT! Compared to forgetting who everyone else was, forgetting who I am is a more complicated problem to solve.
>> CORRECT!
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