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I am so easily tempted by sales at the mall or their "buy one, take one" promos.
I needed just one but I spend more money because of promos..ㅜㅜ
I sometimes regreted what I did, so I go shopping with the friend who will tell me
not to buy more stuff.. I know that it is a just temptation but strangely I feel that I should buy them..^^;
1. Q: Who are these people? A:these are our best students.
2. There are many good students in our school.
3. Q: Who is this? A:This is my mother.
4. There is a good restaurant nearby.
5. This book is pretty interesting.
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Hi Miss [이름]!
Shopping is really a weakness for women. ^^
Sometimes, I am also tempted to buy things I don\'t really need.
So, I avoid going to the mall whenever possible.
But it is hard. ^^
Your strategy is good. I think I will try it next time.^^
Get well soon, Miss [이름]!
Teacher Anne
I am so easily tempted by sales at the mall or their \"buy one, take one\" promos.
>> Correct!
I needed just one but I spend more money because of promos..ㅜㅜ
>> I only need one but I spend more money because of such promos.
I sometimes regreted what I did, so I go shopping with the friend who will tell me not to buy more stuff..
>> I sometimes regret what I did, so I go shopping with a friend who will tell me not to buy more stuff.
I know that it is a just temptation but strangely I feel that I should buy them..^^;
>> Correct!
1. Q: Who are these people? A:these are our best students.
>> Correct!
2. There are many good students in our school.
>> Correct!
3. Q: Who is this? A:This is my mother.
>> Correct!
4. There is a good restaurant nearby.
>> Correct!
5. This book is pretty interesting.
>> Correct!
Shopping is really a weakness for women. ^^
Sometimes, I am also tempted to buy things I don\'t really need.
So, I avoid going to the mall whenever possible.
But it is hard. ^^
Your strategy is good. I think I will try it next time.^^
Get well soon, Miss [이름]!
Teacher Anne
I am so easily tempted by sales at the mall or their \"buy one, take one\" promos.
>> Correct!
I needed just one but I spend more money because of promos..ㅜㅜ
>> I only need one but I spend more money because of such promos.
I sometimes regreted what I did, so I go shopping with the friend who will tell me not to buy more stuff..
>> I sometimes regret what I did, so I go shopping with a friend who will tell me not to buy more stuff.
I know that it is a just temptation but strangely I feel that I should buy them..^^;
>> Correct!
1. Q: Who are these people? A:these are our best students.
>> Correct!
2. There are many good students in our school.
>> Correct!
3. Q: Who is this? A:This is my mother.
>> Correct!
4. There is a good restaurant nearby.
>> Correct!
5. This book is pretty interesting.
>> Correct!
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