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2015-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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Recently, wide pants is a new fashion. In my workplace, there are lots of it on pants hanger. Actually it is not special thig because it already was trend in the past. I saw the expectation of next trend on the internet several years ago and that was about wide pants. At that time. people was used to wearing skinny pants and some of people denied the time for wide pants because of being countrified. However it is really the vogue. I'm happy to not throw my old wide pants away when I arranged my clothing in drawer. I think that look is definitely awesome when that pants is matched with well-matched top by the way it should be a perfect match with others if not, that will be really countrified

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Hello [이름]! ^^   Fantastic essay! You did a good job in describing the latest craze in fashion. ^^ Although, check out all the adjectives used when writing about fashion (e.g. fad,chic, vogue,in thing, rustic, fashion faux pas..etc.) In writing about a certain topic, it\'s good to be familiar with the most associated adjectives used. ~~~   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   Recently, wide pants is a new fashion. In my workplace, there are lots of it on pants hanger. >> Wide leg trousers has become the recent fad since there are a lot of it on display at my workplace.   Actually it is not special thig because it already was trend in the past. I saw the expectation of next trend on the internet several years ago and that was about wide pants. >> Actually, it is not a big deal since it has already been a trend in the past. Several years ago, I saw a fashion prediction about wide leg trousers becoming the next vogue.   At that time. people was used to wearing skinny pants and some of people denied the time for wide pants because of being countrified. >> At that time, people were into wearing slim-fit pants or skinny jeans (when made of denim) and some people shunned wide leg trousers since they thought it was too rustic.   However it is really the vogue. I\'m happy to not throw my old wide pants away when I arranged my clothing in drawer. I think that look is definitely awesome when that pants is matched with well-matched top by the way it should be a perfect match with others if not, that will be really countrified >> however, it has become the newest in thing, I am all too happy to discover that I have not thrown away my old wide leg trousers when I was arranging my closet. I think that the look is definitely chic when these pants are paired with a well-chosen top; otherwise it would be a fashion faux pas.

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