Homework
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Hello, teacher.
I was absent today because of a hangover. T.T
I drunk much with my friends yesterday.
One of my graduate school friends received a doctorate.
So, I drunk with some of friends to celebrate him.
Anyway, I couldn't get up because of that terrible hangover.
Your ship docks on an island. You walk around and realize that nobody on the island knows about colors. They are all color-blind. You find a young child and you have the opportunity to explain the different colors to him, although he will never see them. What are you going to do? How are you going to explain it to him?
It is obvious hard to explain color to someone who is color-blind.
I guess it could be the best explanation to compare color to sound.
Sound has not only its volume but also its high or low tone.
Likewise, color has not only light and darkness but also chroma.
I would tell him to imagine the concept of color through the existence of sound.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. That\'s a great way to explain about colors. I have never thought about that. Well done!
Please review my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! I was absent today because of a hangover. T.T
>> CORRECT! I drunk much with my friends yesterday.
>> I drank too much with my friends yesterday.One of my graduate school friends received a doctorate.
>> CORRECT! So, I drunk with some of friends to celebrate him.
>> So I drank with some of my friends to celebrate with him.Anyway, I couldn\'t get up because of that terrible hangover.
>> CORRECT! It is obvious hard to explain color to someone who is color-blind.
>> It is obviously hard to explain about colors to someone who is color-blind.I guess it could be the best explanation to compare color to sound.
>> I guess the best way would be to compare color to sound.Sound has not only its volume but also its high or low tone.
>> Sound doesn\'t only have volume, it also has high tone or low tone.Likewise, color has not only light and darkness but also chroma.
>> Likewise, color does not only have light and darkness, it also has chroma.I would tell him to imagine the concept of color through the existence of sound.
>> CORRECT!
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