HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! I read some articles after I read your homework.
I have heard about this but I wasn't into this that much..
I am so bad..right?
I just didn't want to think deeply..but I have to..
First of all, she shouldn't use her power in personal and also
she shouldn't do what she is doing for now..
Every Korean has a right to know about our history..she can't just simply
change it. I hope that she could know what she is doing ans how shame it is.
1. Q: What did you get for your birthday?
A: I got a lot of good presents.
2. Q: What did you get for your birthday?
A: I got lots of good presents.
3. Q: Where are you going for your vacation?
A: I'm going to Dominican Republic.
4. Q: What do you think of Mexico?
A: I think it's a very beautiful country.
5. Q: Do you have a scarf I could borrow?
A: Yes, I have two. the blue one and the beige one.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름]!
It is sometimes difficult when a politician uses his or her power for personal reasons.
Some are hoping the change in textbooks won\'t really happen as it would confuse the children.
Maybe with all of these protests, the president won\'t do it.
But she is such a tough leader, isn\'t she?
See you later!
Teacher Anne
Hi! I read some articles after I read your homework.
>> Correct!I have heard about this but I wasn\'t into this that much..
>> Correct!
I am so bad..right?
>> Correct!I just didn\'t want to think deeply..but I have to..
>> Correct!First of all, she shouldn\'t use her power in personal and also
>> First of all, she shouldn\'t use her power for personal matters and alsoshe shouldn\'t do what she is doing for now..
>> Correct!Every Korean has a right to know about our history..
>> Correct!
she can\'t just simply change it.
>> Correct!
I hope that she could know what she is doing ans how shame it is.>> I hope that she would realize what she is doing and know how shameful it is.1. Q: What did you get for your birthday?A: I got a lot of good presents.
>> Correct!2. Q: What did you get for your birthday?A: I got lots of good presents.
>> Correct!3. Q: Where are you going for your vacation?A: I\'m going to Dominican Republic.>> Correct!4. Q: What do you think of Mexico?A: I think it\'s a very beautiful country.>> Correct!5. Q: Do you have a scarf I could borrow?A: Yes, I have two. the blue one and the beige one.
>> Correct! [The]
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