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2015-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. The weather is really cold here in Korea. The thing is, a biting wind, not low temperature makes feel colder. Thanks to the cold weather, I enjoyed this winter well during this trip. See you tomorrow. Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences. You're walking in a forest and you found a black suitcase. Inside it, there is one million dollars and a piece of paper with a single word: "Don't". Would you take the suitcase home or leave it? Why or why not? Are there only two options for me? Taking it home or leaving it there? In fact, I would notify the police that I found one million dollars in the forest. But, if I have to choose one of these two options, I would leave it intactly. I think leaving it intactly is appropriate because the money is obviously not mine. If I keep the money intact, someone who missed that money could easily find it later.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! I wish I could feel the same \"sweater weather\" here in my city.

It\'s December now so it\'s supposed to be colder than usual here... but it\'s not.

Anyway, you\'re such a good person. If it was me who found it, I would definitely take it and immediately travel around the world.

Someone once said, \"finders, keepers\". Haha!

Please check my corrections below.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~

Hello, teacher.

>> CORRECT!
 The weather is really cold here in Korea.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It\'s freezing here in Korea.
 The thing is, a biting wind, not low temperature makes feel colder.

>> The biting wind, not the low temperature, makes it feel colder.
 Thanks to the cold weather, I enjoyed this winter well during this trip.

>> CORRECT! 
See you tomorrow.

>> CORRECT!
Are there only two options for me?

>> CORRECT!

Taking it home or leaving it there?

>> CORRECT! 
 In fact, I would notify the police that I found one million dollars in the forest.

>> Actually, I would probably notify the police if I found one million dollars in the forest.
 But, if I have to choose one of these two options, I would leave it intactly.

>> But if I have to choose one out of these two options, I would leave it intact.
 I think leaving it intactly is appropriate because the money is obviously not mine.

>> I think leaving it intact is appropriate because the money is obviously not mine.
 If I keep the money intact, someone who missed that money could easily find it later.

>> If I keep it intact, the person who lost it could easily find it later.

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