Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! I wish I could feel the same \"sweater weather\" here in my city.
It\'s December now so it\'s supposed to be colder than usual here... but it\'s not.
Anyway, you\'re such a good person. If it was me who found it, I would definitely take it and immediately travel around the world.
Someone once said, \"finders, keepers\". Haha!
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!
The weather is really cold here in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It\'s freezing here in Korea.
The thing is, a biting wind, not low temperature makes feel colder.
>> The biting wind, not the low temperature, makes it feel colder.
Thanks to the cold weather, I enjoyed this winter well during this trip.
>> CORRECT!
See you tomorrow.
>> CORRECT!
Are there only two options for me?
>> CORRECT!
Taking it home or leaving it there?
>> CORRECT!
In fact, I would notify the police that I found one million dollars in the forest.
>> Actually, I would probably notify the police if I found one million dollars in the forest.
But, if I have to choose one of these two options, I would leave it intactly.
>> But if I have to choose one out of these two options, I would leave it intact.
I think leaving it intactly is appropriate because the money is obviously not mine.
>> I think leaving it intact is appropriate because the money is obviously not mine.
If I keep the money intact, someone who missed that money could easily find it later.
>> If I keep it intact, the person who lost it could easily find it later.
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