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2015-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

These days many people watch foreign movies especially hollywood movies because their scale is very big. In korea, we can't make hero movies such as iron man. I also enjoy seeing foriegn movies because they are more interesting. Also they can help to improve English skills. Government should support local film industry because without support and regulations, local film industry will have a problem because of hollywood movies.

강사 첨삭

The scope of your vocabulary is indeed improving, Adam!

Thanks for doing your homework ;)

I just used another word to avoid repetition^^

See you tomorrow!

These days many people watch foreign movies especially hollywood movies because their scale is very big.

>>These days many people watch foreign movies especially Hollywood movies because their scale is very big.
In korea, we can\'t make hero movies such as iron man.

>>In Korea, we can\'t make hero movies such as Ironman.
I also enjoy seeing foriegn movies because they are more interesting.

>>CORRECT!

Also they can help to improve English skills.

>>Furthermore, they can help to improve English skills.
Government should support local film industry because without support and regulations, local film industry will have a problem because of hollywood movies.

>> Government should support local film industry because without support and regulations, local film industry will have a problem due to Hollywood movies.

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