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Essay: What are your favorite cartoons? Many cartoons exist in society. My favorite cartoon is "짱구". "짱구"is one of many cartoons. It is about 짱구's family. My favorite character in the cartoon is "짱구" "짱구" is a very attractive character. l love "짱구". Because l learn many things in full of fun. For example, l learn sorrow and happiness during watch the cartoon. l like watching "짱구" and l hope for a writer to make 짱구 continuously. 1. You have to believe in yourself if you ever expect to be successful at something. CHOSEN WORD: yourself = Pronoun 2. We left for the mountain just before six in the morning. CHOSEN WORD: left = Verb 3. We first went to the store to buy a few things. CHOSEN WORD: to = Preposition 4. We had a breakfast at a cafe near the rail station. CHOSEN WORD: breakfast = Noun 5. My friend wasn't strong enough to lift his heavy rucksack. CHOSEN WORD: heavy = Adjective 6. I helped him carry it. CHOSEN WORD: it = Pronoun 7. The weather was very cold. CHOSEN WORD: very = Adverb 8. My friend said, "Oh! What a cold weather!" CHOSEN WORD: oh = Interjection 9. We didn't spend the night there. CHOSEN WORD: there = Adverb 10. We got back home late at night but we didn't go to s[이름]p immediately. We were very hungry. CHOSEN WORD: but = Conjunction Thank you very much:)

Dear [이름] YE,   Happy Monday! ^.^   Good job! ^^   However, I want to you to read the corrections and suggestions below.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you tomorrow! ^^. S[이름]p tight! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Essay: What are your favorite cartoons?>> CORRECT! Many cartoons exist in society.>> CORRECT! My favorite cartoon is \"짱구\".>> My favorite cartoon is \"짱구.\" >> BETTER: My favorite cartoon is \"Jjanggu.\" 1. The PERIOD should be placed before the CLOSED PARENTHESIS. \"짱구\"is one of many cartoons.>> CORRECT! >> OR: \"Jjanggu\" is one of many cartoons that kids really like. It is about 짱구\'s family.>> CORRECT! >> OR: It is about Jjanggu\'s family. My favorite character in the cartoon is \"짱구\">> My favorite character in the cartoon is \"짱구.\" >> OR: My favorite character in the cartoon is \"Jjanggu.\" 2. See number 1. \"짱구\" is a very attractive character.>> CORRECT! >> OR: Jjjanggu is a very attractive character. l love \"짱구\". Because l learn many things in full of fun.>> l love \"짱구,\" because l learn many things in full of fun. >> OR: l love Jjanggu, because l learn many things in full of fun. >> OR: l love Jjanggu. It is because l learn many things in full of fun. 3. The COMMA should be after JJANGGU. For example, l learn sorrow and happiness during watch the cartoon.>> IT IS BETTER  TO SAY: For example, I learn sorrow and happiness while watching the cartoon. l like watching \"짱구\" and l hope for a writer to make 짱구 continuously.>> I like watching Jjanggu, and I hope for its writer to make it continuously. 1. You have to believe in yourself if you ever expect to be successful at something.CHOSEN WORD: yourself = Pronoun>> CORRECT!2. We left for the mountain just before six in the morning.CHOSEN WORD: left = Verb>> CORRECT!3. We first went to the store to buy a few things.CHOSEN WORD: to = Preposition>> CORRECT!4. We had a breakfast at a cafe near the rail station.CHOSEN WORD: breakfast = Noun>> CORRECT!5. My friend wasn\'t strong enough to lift his heavy rucksack.CHOSEN WORD: heavy = Adjective>> CORRECT!6. I helped him carry it.CHOSEN WORD: it = Pronoun>> CORRECT!7. The weather was very cold.CHOSEN WORD: very = Adverb>> CORRECT!8. My friend said, \"Oh! What a cold weather!\"CHOSEN WORD: oh = Interjection>> CORRECT!9. We didn\'t spend the night there.CHOSEN WORD: there = Adverb>> CORRECT!10. We got back home late at night but we didn\'t go to s[이름]p immediately. We were very hungry. CHOSEN WORD: but = Conjunction>> CORRECT!Thank you very much:) >> Thank you very much! :) 4. You forgot to put a punctuation mark after MUCH.