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2015-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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Occaisionally, I miss not to join any clubs in university of course, there was nothing to resister. All there were in universiry was not interesting to me and also I did'nt have enough time to enjoy with others. However after graduation of university I felt something lacking of my memory. I think it is one of special right of university student. If I joined any clubs could my experience and memory be plentiful?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! ^^ Thank you for your essay!^^ You did a good job of it. All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==       Occaisionally, I miss not to join any clubs in university of course, there was nothing to resister. All there were in universiry was not interesting to me and also I did\'nt have enough time to enjoy with others. >> Sometimes, I miss not joining any clubs back in university since, of course, there was nothing that holds interest for me and I didn\'t have enough time to hang out with my peers as well.   However after graduation of university I felt something lacking of my memory. I think it is one of special right of university student. >> However, after I finished university, I felt like something was missing. I think joining clubs is part of being a university student.   If I joined any clubs could my experience and memory be plentiful? >> Had I joined any clubs, would I have more experiences and memories?

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