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Hi Miss [이름]!
I\'m glad your time in my country has given you a lot of happy memories. ^^
Do you get a lot of stress in your place?
There were times when I wished I lived in another country.
But when I realized what a beautiful country I have,
I am just so happy to live in a place like this. ^^
Thanks for sharing, Miss [이름]!
See you!
Teacher Anne
I was really happy when I was in the Philippines.
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I had just finished my work and went there to study.
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It was hard to learn English but I was so free because when I worked in school, I was so frustrated...
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I enjoyed there alot..
>> I enjoyed my time there a lot.
I had made foreign friends for the first time and had trips every weekends..
>> Correct!
I didn\'t need to think about other things..hehe
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I want to go back..hehe
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1. I went to the tourist office to get some information.
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2. The woman said they didn\'t have any more applications.
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3. Someone called you last night.
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4. I need some time to think about this.
>> Correct!
5. Some day we\'ll be together.
>> Correct!
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