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2015-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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I was really happy when I was in the Philippines. I had just finished my work and went there to study. It was hard to learn English but I was so free because when I worked in school, I was so frustrated... I enjoyed there alot.. I had made foreign friends for the first time and had trips every weekends.. I didn't need to think about other things..hehe I want to go back..hehe 1. I went to the tourist office to get some information. 2. The woman said they didn't have any more applications. 3. Someone called you last night. 4. I need some time to think about this. 5. Some day we'll be together.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

I\'m glad your time in my country has given you a lot of happy memories. ^^

Do you get a lot of stress in your place?

There were times when I wished I lived in another country.

But when I realized what a beautiful country I have,

I am just so happy to live in a place like this. ^^

Thanks for sharing, Miss [이름]!

See you!

Teacher Anne

 

I was really happy when I was in the Philippines.

>> Correct!
I had just finished my work and went there to study.

.>> Correct!
It was hard to learn English but I was so free because when I worked in school, I was so frustrated...

>> Correct!

I enjoyed there alot..

>> I enjoyed my time there a lot.
I had made foreign friends for the first time and had trips every weekends..

>> Correct!
I didn\'t need to think about other things..hehe

>> Correct!
I want to go back..hehe
>> Correct!
1. I went to the tourist office to get some information.
>> Correct!
2. The woman said they didn\'t have any more applications.
>> Correct!
3. Someone called you last night.
>> Correct!
4. I need some time to think about this.
>> Correct!
5. Some day we\'ll be together.

>> Correct!

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