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Hi, Miss [이름]!
I agree with your observation.
Teenagers are so good at reasoning nowadays that if we correct them about their behavior, they immediately respond with a foolish reason.
They are far more rebellious than the previous generation, I think.
And they also get involved in crimes at an early age.
Sometimes, when I think about it, the society scares me.
Thanks for sharing your ideas.
See you tomorrow!
Teacher Anne
Right! Nowadays, teenagers are harsher than the old generation..
>> Correct!
I mean they knew what is right but they don\'t follow the rules and also don\'t follow the adults\' advice..
>> I mean, they know what is right, but they don\'t follow the rules and they also don\'t follow the adults\' advice.
They should be punished same as adults
>> They should have the same punishments as the adults have
so that teenagers also think about their life more seriouly..
>> So that teenagers would also think about their life more seriously.
but it depends on the situations...
>> But it depends on the situation.
1. The ballerina moved around very gracefully. (graceful).
>> Correct!
2. David easily (easy) won the first race.
>> Correct!
3. I don\'t know exactly (exact) how much money he makes.
>> Correct!
4. I honestly (honest) don\'t know what John told his sister.
>> Correct!
5. The singer of the band sang very badly (bad) during the concert.
>> Correct!
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