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2015-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. As I told you today, I had the last class for this semester. I still have two papers to submit, but I feel so relived that all classes are over. See you tomorrow. Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences. You are offered a pill that makes you 25% more intelligent but permanently removes all your hair, including eyebrows. Do you take it? Why? I would definitely not take the pill. That sounds terrible even though I could be a more intelligent person than now. I usually have thought that becoming intelligent is very worthwhile for human beings. Nonetheless, I think that becoming intelligent without my own effort is not that worth. Of course, losing all my hair is obviously terrible thing. However, I would choose not to take the pill, not because losing all my hair is horrible but because becoming intelligent by myself is more worth than being intelligent itself.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Well done! I agree with everything that you said here. :) Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! As I told you today, I had the last class for this semester. >> CORRECT! I still have two papers to submit, but I feel so relived that all my classes are over. >> CORRECT! >> relieved See you tomorrow. >> CORRECT! I would definitely not take the pill. >> CORRECT! That sounds terrible even though I could be a more intelligent person than now. >> Even though I could be a more intelligent person than I am now, it still sounds terrible.I usually have thought that becoming intelligent is very worthwhile for human beings. >> I\'ve always thought that being intelligent is very useful for humans.Nonetheless, I think that becoming intelligent without my own effort is not that worth. >> Nonethelesss, I think becoming intelligent without my own effort is not worth it.Of course, losing all my hair is obviously a terrible thing. >> CORRECT! However, I would choose not to take the pill, not because losing all my hair is horrible but because becoming intelligent by myself is more worth than being intelligent itself. >> However, I would choose not to take the pill, not just because losing all my hair is horrible, but because becoming intelligent with my own effort is worth more than being intelligent in an instant.

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