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2015-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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For me, FRIENDS are like a mirror.. Whenever they do something, that would be lesson for me.. I have experienced many things though them... For example, some friends got married first then they tought me the better ways.. and also having a boy friend..life in work place... We are like mirrors for each other.. 1. I was not able to s[이름]p well for a week now. 2. When I first saw her, she was standing on the balcony. 3. Really? You moved to a new apartment? How long have you been living there? 4. Every time I see that movie, it makes me cry. 5. I have stopped smoking three years ago.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

I agree! We can all learn lessons from everyone. ^^

By the way, that was a nice analogy.

I feel like some of my friends are also a part of my soul.

Though we are different in some ways, there is a part of us that speaks to each other.

It\'s a bit sentimental, isn\'t it? ^^;

See you later!

Teacher Anne

 

For me, FRIENDS are like a mirror..

>> Correct!

>> For me, friends are like mirrors.
Whenever they do something, that would be lesson for me..

>> Correct!
I have experienced many things though them...

>> Correct! [through]
For example, some friends got married first then they tought me the better ways..

>> For example, some of my friends got married first and taught me better ways.

and also having a boy friend..life in work place...

>> Also, they taught me something about having a boyfriend and of life in the workplace.
We are like mirrors for each other..
>> Correct!
1. I was not able to s[이름]p well for a week now.

>> Correct!
2. When I first saw her, she was standing on the balcony.

>> Correct!
3. Really? You moved to a new apartment? How long have you been living there?

>> Correct!
4. Every time I see that movie, it makes me cry.

>> Correct!
5. I have stopped smoking three years ago.

>> stopped

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