Homework

Essay: Who is your role model? I think many good people live with me in the same age. l love them and l respect them. My role model is Hillary Rodham Clinton. I have many reasons why my role model is her. She shows peolple all over the world woman's strong power. She also makes an effort to promote woman's rights and overcomes sex discimination. l want to emulate her and l want to be a strong woman that l can do anything. 1. city - cities 2. house - houses 3. boy - boys 4. family - families 5. life - lives 6. photo - photos 7. phone - phones 8. sandwich - sandwiches 9. nurse - nurses 10. elf - elves 11. phenomenon - phenomenos 12. criterion - citeria 13. village - villages 14. toy - toys 15. zoo - zoos

Dear [이름] YE,   A blissful Tuesday to us! ^.^   To start, I want to congratulate you for doing your homework well.   Anyway, I think you can be or be better than Hillary Rodham Clinton. You are a strong lady. I think you can also be a politician. You will be a good leader of your country. I will support you. ^^   Anyhow, you got 13 out of 15 on your 2nd homework. Phenomenon cannot be phenomenos. The right plural form of it is phenomena. Be careful next time. ^^, The other mistake is about your spelling. CITERIA should be CRITERIA.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you tomorrow! ^^. S[이름]p tight tonight! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Essay: Who is your role model?>> CORRECT! I think many good people live with me in the same age.>> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: I think many good people still live until now. l love them and l respect them.>> CORRECT! My role model is Hillary Rodham Clinton.>> CORRECT! I have many reasons why my role model is her.>> CORRECT! She shows peolple all over the world woman\'s strong power.>> She shows people all over the world woman\'s strong power. >> BETTER: She shows people all over the world women\'s strong power. 1. SPELLING: PEOLPLE should be PEOPLE. She also makes an effort to promote woman\'s rights and overcomes sex discimination.>> She also makes an effort to promote women\'s rights and overcome sex discrimination.  2. SPELLING: DISCIMINATION should be DISCRIMINATION. l want to emulate her and l want to be a strong woman that l can do anything.>> I want to emulate her and to be a strong woman that I can do anything. 3. Avoid redundancy or repeating words in your sentence.   1. city - cities >> CORRECT! 2. house - houses >> CORRECT! 3. boy - boys >> CORRECT! 4. family - families>> CORRECT! 5. life - lives>> CORRECT! 6. photo - photos>> CORRECT! 7. phone - phones >> CORRECT!8. sandwich - sandwiches>> CORRECT! 9. nurse - nurses>> CORRECT! 10. elf - elves>> CORRECT! 11. phenomenon - phenomenos>> phenomena 12. criterion - citeria >> criteria 13. village - villages >> CORRECT! 14. toy - toys>> CORRECT! 15. zoo - zoos >> CORRECT!