Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
I am worried about my son if he could stand without his daddy.
Anyway, we're going to spend quality time together until the end of this month,
Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences.
If you could invent a new type of drink, what would it be and why? Describe the taste/ flavor and the color.
I had imagined a new type of drink with chestnut.
It is usual to make a drink with fruit, not grain.
Moreover, I heard that it is difficult to make a drink with grain due to technical problems.
However, if I could I would invent a new type of drink with chestnut.
I am sure that it has a sweet taste, and it is good as a breakfast substitute.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! This is a wonderful idea! Actually, I have tasted chestnut water in Singapore before and I loved it! That\'s a clever idea. I would love to try your chestnut drink someday.
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!I am worried about my son if he could stand without his daddy.
>> I am worried if my son could stand not being with his daddy.Anyway, we\'re going to spend quality time together until the end of this month,
>> CORRECT!I had imagined a new type of drink with chestnut.
>> CORRECT!It is usual to make a drink with fruit, not grain.
>> It is common to make a drink with fruits, not grains.Moreover, I heard that it is difficult to make a drink with grain due to technical problems.
>> CORRECT!However, if I could I would invent a new type of drink with chestnut.
>> CORRECT!I am sure that it has a sweet taste, and it is good as a breakfast substitute.
>> I am sure it would have a sweet taste and it is a good substitute for breakfast.
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