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2015-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Essay: Does pop culture deserve serious study? l think pop culture should deserve serious study. lf we study pop culture, we will be able to find out many things. Such as the reason why people love pop culture and enjoy it. We will be able to also find out people's mind while enjoying pop culture. l love pop culture. But, Pop culture's study will be done by pop culture researcher. Just enjoy it with no definite idea! 1. These (person) _____ are protesting against the president. WHAT YOU SHOULD TYPE: 1. These people are protesting against the president. 2. The (woman) ___women__ over there want to meet the manager. 3. My (child) __children___ hate eating pasta. 4. I am ill. My (foot) _feet____ hurt. 5. Muslims kill (sheep) ____sheep_ in a religious celebration. 6. I clean my (tooth) __teeth___ three times a day. 7. The (student ) __students___ are doing the exercise right now. 8. The (fish) __fish___ I bought is in the fridge. 9. They are sending some (man) __men___ to fix the roof. 10. Most (housewife) __housewives___ work more than ten hours a day at home. 11. Where did you put the (knife) _knives____ ? On the (shelf) __shelves___ . 12. (Goose) __Geese___ like water. 13. (Piano) __Pianos___ are expensive 14. Some (policeman) __policemen___ came to arrest him. 15. Where is my (luggage) __luggage___ ? In the car!

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Dear [Name],   A terrific Thursday to us! ^.^   Let\'s talk about your first homework. You have a well-composed writing, but I think you are still confused about how to use MODAL VERBS and ADVERBS. I want you to read the corrections and suggestion below carefully, and do some review in relation to the Parts of Speech.   Now, let\'s have a discussion about your second sentence. You get a perfect score. ^^ Perfect! ^^, However, it could have been better if you rewrite the sentences. ^^.   Anyway, that\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you very soon! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Essay: Does pop culture deserve serious study?>> CORRECT! l think pop culture should deserve serious study.>> I think pop culture deserves serious study. >> OR: I think pop culture should be seriously studied. 1. The idea in your sentence is a little bit confusing, because you used SHOULD. It is better to remove it (SHOULD) or not to use SHOULD and DESERVE in one sentence. lf we study pop culture, we will be able to find out many things.>> CORRECT! Such as the reason why people love pop culture and enjoy it.>> CORRECT! We will be able to also find out people\'s mind while enjoying pop culture.>> We will also be able to find out people\'s mind while enjoying pop culture. >> OR: We will be able to find out people\'s mind while enjoying pop culture, too. 2. ALSO can be placed before the main verb of a sentence, but in your sentence, the main verb is BE ABLE TO, so ALSO should be placed before BE ABLE TO. l love pop culture. >> CORRECT! But, Pop culture\'s study will be done by pop culture researcher.>> But, pop culture\'s study should be done by a pop culture researcher. >> BETTER: But, pop culture\'s study should be done by pop culture researchers. 3. The P in POP should be in its lowercase form. 4. WILL should be SHOULD because you are proposing an idea. Just enjoy it with no definite idea!>> CORRECT! 1. These (person) _____ are protesting against the president.WHAT YOU SHOULD TYPE: 1. These people are protesting against the president.2. The (woman) ___women__ over there want to meet the manager.>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: The women over there want to meet the manager. 3. My (child) __children___ hate eating pasta.>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: The children hate eating pasta. 4. I am ill. My (foot) _feet____ hurt.>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: I am ill. My feet hurt. 5. Muslims kill (sheep) ____sheep_ in a religious celebration.>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: Muslims kill sheep in a religious celebration. 6. I clean my (tooth) __teeth___ three times a day.>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: I clean my teeth three times a day. 7. The (student ) __students___ are doing the exercise right now.>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: The students are doing the exercise right now. 8. The (fish) __fish___ I bought is in the fridge.>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: The fish I bought is in the fridge. 9. They are sending some (man) __men___ to fix the roof.>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: They are sending some men to fix the roof. 10. Most (housewife) __housewives___ work more than ten hours a day at home.>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: Most housewives work more than ten hours a day at home. 11. Where did you put the (knife) _knives____ ?>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: Where did you put the knives? On the (shelf) __shelves___ .>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: On the shelves. 12. (Goose) __Geese___ like water.>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: Geese like water. 13. (Piano) __Pianos___ are expensive>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: Pianos are expensive. 14. Some (policeman) __policemen___ came to arrest him.>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: Some policemen came to arrest him. 15. Where is my (luggage) __luggage___ ?>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: Where is my luggage? In the car!

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