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2015-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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"Quitters never win". I agreed with this so I didn't want to give up or stop doing theproject that I shpuld do..However, I realized that quitting doesn't mean the looser..I had a bad relationship with my senior teacher I thought if I could overcome this situation, I would be a looser but it did not work..our relationship was getting worse and worse..so I tried not to face to her and didn't have argue with her.. I wasn't happy with the work because of her at that time..Finally, I found a new job and met good co-teachers. Now, I am really happy with my work.. I realized that sometimes I need to go around the way..if there is an abstacle..hehe 1. I will be ready in 30 minutes. 2. Kelly has not seen him since two weeks. 3. She slept for one hour. 4. My sister will be here in two hours. 5.I have not eaten since this morning

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름],

I found a quote on the internet: \"Some people are like clouds, when they disappear, it is a brighter day.\"^^

I found it so amusing.

Anyway, you made the right decision to just leave that kind of environment since it is not helping you at all.

And you are right, quitting does not make you a loser.

Sometimes it makes you a happier person. ^^;

Keep on!

Have a happy day!

Teacher Anne

 

\"Quitters never win\". I agreed with this so I didn\'t want to give up or stop doing theproject that I shpuld do..

>> \"Quitters never win\". I agreed with this so I didn\'t want to give up or stop doing the project that I should do..

However, I realized that quitting doesn\'t mean the looser..

>> However, I realized that quitting doesn\'t mean being the loser..

I had a bad relationship with my senior teacher I thought if I could overcome this situation,

>> I had a bad relationship with my senior teacher, where I thought if I could overcome this situation,

 I would be a looser but it did not work..

>> Correct! [loser]

our relationship was getting worse and worse..

>> Correct!

so I tried not to face to her and didn\'t have argue with her..

>> So I tried not to face her and didn\'t argue with her.
I wasn\'t happy with the work because of her at that time..

>> Correct!

Finally, I found a new job and met good co-teachers.

>> Correct! 

Now, I am really happy with my work..

>> Correct!
I realized that sometimes I need to go around the way..if there is an abstacle..hehe

>> Correct! [obstacle]
1. I will be ready in 30 minutes.

>> Correct!
2. Kelly has not seen him since two weeks.

>> Kelly has not seen him for two weeks.
3. She slept for one hour.

>> Correct!
4. My sister will be here in two hours.

>> Correct!
5.I have not eaten since this morning.

>> Correct!

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