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2015-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was childhood, many teacher liked rich students. They want some presents to students' parents. I think they were holy terrors. However nowadays, many teacher are very friendly and kind. So many students and teachers are friendly. When I was a student, I didn't like them. So I want my children to be friendly with their teachers.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You are getting better everyday. Some reminders:1. \'Many\' is used with plural nouns. example: many teachers   2. \'Childhood\' is the state or period of being a child so you can write: in my childhood   Teacher Venus^^   When I was childhood, many teacher liked rich students. >>>When I was in my childhood, many teachers liked rich students. They want some presents to students\' parents. >>>They want some presents from the students\' parents. I think they were holy terrors. >>>CORRECT However nowadays, many teacher are very friendly and kind. >>>However nowadays, many teachers are very friendly and kind. So many students and teachers are friendly. >>>CORRECT When I was a student, I didn\'t like them.>>>CORRECT   So I want my children to be friendly with their teachers. >>>CORRECT

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