homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was childhood, many teacher liked rich students.
They want some presents to students' parents.
I think they were holy terrors.
However nowadays, many teacher are very friendly and kind.
So many students and teachers are friendly.
When I was a student, I didn't like them.
So I want my children to be friendly with their teachers.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are getting better everyday. Some reminders:1. \'Many\' is used with plural nouns.
example: many teachers
2. \'Childhood\' is the state or period of being a child so you can write:
in my childhood
Teacher Venus^^
When I was childhood, many teacher liked rich students.
>>>When I was in my childhood, many teachers liked rich students.
They want some presents to students\' parents.
>>>They want some presents from the students\' parents.
I think they were holy terrors.
>>>CORRECT
However nowadays, many teacher are very friendly and kind.
>>>However nowadays, many teachers are very friendly and kind.
So many students and teachers are friendly.
>>>CORRECT
When I was a student, I didn\'t like them.>>>CORRECT
So I want my children to be friendly with their teachers.
>>>CORRECT
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