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2015-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Maria doesn't work for an insurance company. 2. Martin doesn't live in San Francisco. 3. Samuel does not need to undergo a bypass surgery. 4. Maria does not work three jobs to support her family. 5. She is not a trained classical dancer. 6. I didn' meet some French girls on my holiday

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], I think you are really improving very fast. I just want you to know that you need to focus on your vocabulary and speaking skills so that you can express yourself effectively. There are many ways for you to enhance your skills but I want you to focus on one thing which with your grammar.  T. Jeny   1. Maria doesn\'t work for an insurance company.>>correct2. Martin doesn\'t live in San Francisco.>>correct3. Samuel does not need to undergo a bypass surgery.>>correct4. Maria does not work three jobs to support her family.>>correct5. She is not a trained classical dancer.>>correct6. I didn\'t meet some French girls on my holiday >>correct

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