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Music has special ability. People can heal their mind by listening to music. In my case when I am blue, I listen to ballad because it makes me feel better. Sometimes ballad makes me feel more sad so I am moved. We can't live without music. We live with music. Many people find new music everyday because they want to listen to good music.
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Music has special ability.
>>Music has a special ability.
People can heal their mind by listening to music.
>>CORRECT!
In my case when I am blue, I listen to ballad because it makes me feel better.
>>CORRECT!
Sometimes ballad makes me feel more sad so I am moved.
>>Sometimes ballad makes me feel sadder so I am moved.
We can\'t live without music.
>>CORRECT!
We live with music.
>>CORRECT!
Many people find new music everyday because they want to listen to good music.
>>CORRECT!
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