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2015-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Essay: Do you have good manners? l think l have good manners. l was taught good manners by my mother from the cradle. When my family eat dinner, l wait for my father to eat first. And l always greet all the adults whom l know when l meet them. lt is important for people to have good manners. Because most people don't like them who have bad manners. We should make an effort to have good manners. 1. The police caught the (theifs, thieves) _____. EXAMPLE: The police caught the thieves. 2. What are oxen and geese? They are animals! 3. I bought beautiful scarfs yesterday. 4. Scientists formulate hypotheses before they carry out research. 5. I met the children in the garden. 6. Did you put your baggage in the car? Yes I did. 7. These wolves are dangerous. 8. I found the information I was looking for. 9. It is difficult to change some religious beliefs.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름] YE! ^.^ T.G.I.F.~~~! ^^   What are good manners? They are actions you do to show your respect to other people and yourself. In addition, it is also about considering other people\'s feelings. What would you feel if someone you know didn\'t greet you when he or she saw you? It feels bad, right? Other people would feel like that if you didn\'t greet them. I strongly agree with you when you said that we should make an effort to have good manners.   By the way, I would like to commend you for perfecting your second homework. However, you forgot one thing there. It is not putting a comma after YES. It is just a small mistake, so don\'t worry a lot. Just be careful next time. ^^   Anyway, that\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you very soon! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Essay: Do you have good manners?>> CORRECT! >> OR: Do You Have Good Manners? ***You can make the essay question as the title of your composition. l think l have good manners.>> CORRECT! l was taught good manners by my mother from the cradle.>> CORRECT! When my family eat dinner, l wait for my father to eat first.>> When my family eats dinner, I wait for my father to eat first. 1. Be careful od your SUBJECT-VERB AGREEMENT.     If the subject is singular, the verb should also be singular.     EXAMPLE: Paula likes eating.     If the subject is plural, the verb should also be plural.     EXAMPLE: Women like eating. And l always greet all the adults whom l know when l meet them.>> And, I always greet all the adults whome I know when I meet them. 2. You forgot to put A COMMA after AND. lt is important for people to have good manners.>> CORRECT! Because most people don\'t like them who have bad manners.>> Because, most people don\'t like someone who has bad manners. 3. I think your sentence is not yet complete, so I added SOMEONE before WHO and changed HAVE into HAS. We should make an effort to have good manners.>> CORRECT! 1. The police caught the (theifs, thieves) _____.EXAMPLE: The police caught the thieves.2. What are oxen and geese?They are animals!>> CORRECT! 3. I bought beautiful scarfs yesterday.>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: I bought beautiful scarves yesterday. 4. Scientists formulate hypotheses before they carry out research.>> CORRECT! 5. I met the children in the garden.>> CORRECT! 6. Did you put your baggage in the car?>> CORRECT! Yes I did. >> Yes, I did. 7. These wolves are dangerous.>> CORRECT! 8. I found the information I was looking for.>> CORRECT! 9. It is difficult to change some religious beliefs. >> CORRECT!

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