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Hello [이름],

I guess we need to see and focus on the positive things about life and change.

Thank you for your homework because it made me realize the positive side of plastic surgery...thank you!!!

T. Jeny

Plastic surgery is one of ways to express by oneself.

>>Plastic surgery is one of the ways to express oneself.
Making a good appearance is essential as much as having a good mind.

>>Having a good appearance is essential as much as being smart.
But excessive plastic surgery is harmful.

>>correct
First, It might cause health problem.

>>First, it might cause health problems.
Second, unique personality is break out.

>>Second, a unique personality will come out.

If you do supplement weak point and enhance good point, I don\' t have any reason to have against.

>>As long as, you will enhance the good points of it and get rid of the weak points, I have nothing against plastic surgery.