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2015-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hi!!*^^* I haven't thought about this because I am educated that drugs are bad.. However, I noticed that drugs can be good to use like curing the disease and kiling the pain..the reason why the goverment makes rules forit because some people use them badly.. There are always 2 sides as good or bad.. Somehow, we need some rules for that. 1. There are fewer people here than in the center of the city. 2. I make less money than he does. 3. I'm tired. I need to ask for less responsibilities. 4. He travels fewer than he used to. 5. They know less than they pretend to know.

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Hello, Miss [이름]!

I agree! There is always a need to balance everything.

Although I have heard some good benefits of marijuana, I still wouldn\'t want it to be legalized.

As they say, prevention is better than cure. ^^

I am glad you are feeling better today.

Stay safe!

See you tomorrow!

Teacher Anne

 

Hi!!*^^* I haven\'t thought about this because I am educated that drugs are bad..

>>  Hi!!*^^* I haven\'t thought about this because I have been educated that drugs are bad..
However, I noticed that drugs can be good to use like curing the disease and kiling the pain..

>> Correct! [killing]

>> However, I noticed that drugs can be good to use like curing diseases and kiling the pain..

the reason why the goverment makes rules forit because some people use them badly..

>> The reason that the government makes rules for it is because some people use them for bad purposes. 

There are always 2 sides as good or bad..

>> There are always 2 sides of everything: good or bad.
Somehow, we need some rules for that.
>> Correct!
1. There are fewer people here than in the center of the city.

>> Correct!

2. I make less money than he does.

>> Correct!
3. I\'m tired. I need to ask for less responsibilities.

>> fewer
4. He travels fewer than he used to.

>> less
5. They know less than they pretend to know.

>> Correct!

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