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Hello, Miss [이름]!
I agree! There is always a need to balance everything.
Although I have heard some good benefits of marijuana, I still wouldn\'t want it to be legalized.
As they say, prevention is better than cure. ^^
I am glad you are feeling better today.
Stay safe!
See you tomorrow!
Teacher Anne
Hi!!*^^* I haven\'t thought about this because I am educated that drugs are bad..
>> Hi!!*^^* I haven\'t thought about this because I have been educated that drugs are bad..
However, I noticed that drugs can be good to use like curing the disease and kiling the pain..
>> Correct! [killing]
>> However, I noticed that drugs can be good to use like curing diseases and kiling the pain..
the reason why the goverment makes rules forit because some people use them badly..
>> The reason that the government makes rules for it is because some people use them for bad purposes.
There are always 2 sides as good or bad..
>> There are always 2 sides of everything: good or bad.
Somehow, we need some rules for that.
>> Correct!
1. There are fewer people here than in the center of the city.
>> Correct!
2. I make less money than he does.
>> Correct!
3. I\'m tired. I need to ask for less responsibilities.
>> fewer
4. He travels fewer than he used to.
>> less
5. They know less than they pretend to know.
>> Correct!
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