Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Are you feeling alright? You looks like a ghost!
2. What are like your children like to do after school?
3. It's incredible how much you like your mother.
4. What looks like the weather like in New York at the moment?
5. Caroline works very well. She looks like her sister.
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(This is my presentation script. I will divide it in few days to send you! I prepare some answers that I guess people will ask to me. The way of presenting is like exhibition. Presentors stand on their posters, and audiences are walking around them and ask something that they feel interesting to presentors.)
Title : What did I do and learn in this year
Q1. Tell me about your poster. What it is about?
A1. It means what did I do and what did I learn from that doing in this year.I want to express ‘did’ is my nutrient to grow me up as a water drops, and ‘learned’ is my output as a apples.
(I will write more on tomorrow. haha. Thank you for every time to be with me! See you~)
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, [이름]!
It\'s a brand new week! I hope to see you happy and safe every time.
Study harder and be the English speaker you\'ve always dreamed of! I\'m proud of you!
Thank you for being with me too! See you later!!
With love,
Teacher Carmen ^^
1. Are you feeling alright? You looks like a ghost!
>> Are you feeling alright? You look like a ghost!2. What are like your children like to do after school?
>> What do your children like to do after school?3. It\'s incredible how much you like your mother.
>> It\'s incredible how much you look like your mother. 4. What looks like the weather like in New York at the moment?
>> What is the weather like in New York at the moment?5. Caroline works very well. She looks like her sister.
>> Caroline works very well. She is like her sister.--(This is my presentation script.
>> This is the script in my presentation.
I will divide it in few days to send you!
>> I will divide the script and send it to you in a few days.
I prepare some answers that I guess people will ask to me.
>> I prepared some answers to the questions that people will ask me.
The way of presenting is like exhibition.
>> The mode of the presentation is like an exhibition.
Presentors stand on their posters, and audiences are walking around them and ask something that they feel interesting to presentors.)>> The presenters will stand on their posts and the audience will surround them and ask something that they find interesting.
Title : What did I do and learn in this year>> Title : What did I do and learn this year?Q1. Tell me about your poster. What it is about?
>> Correct!A1. It means what did I do and what did I learn from that doing in this year.
>> A1. My poster shows the things I did and the lessons I learned this year.
I want to express ‘did’ is my nutrient to grow me up as a water drops, and ‘learned’ is my output as a apples.>> The water drops symbolized the things I did last year. It is a key ingredient that reflects how I grow as a person.
>> The apples symbolized the things I learned this year.
(I will write more on tomorrow. haha.
>> I will write more tomorrow. Haha!
Thank you for every time to be with me!
>> Thank you for being with me every time.
See you~)
>> See you!
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