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2015-12-15 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. We are going to finish our text book soon. I am not sure that I fully undertand our book, but I am happyt that I can finish this book without any big difficulties. And, I am looking forward to our next text book.^^ Below is the next part of my abstract in English. From the conditions of Neo-Confucian restoration, the Coup of 1623 meets two conditions both the former king’s serious mistakes and the servant who tries to take over the throne. Therefore, without proceeding the third stage, the Coup of 1623 can secure justification as a Neo-Confucian restoration with just meeting the two conditions. However, this paper will pay attention to the phenomenon that the main group of the 1623 Coup responses the third question by themselves, and it will ask the following question, “Who is the major actor of this 1623 Coup?”.

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Hello Kaylee! I checked your writing below. Please review it. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! We are going to finish our text book soon. >> CORRECT! I am not sure that I fully undertand our book, but I am happyt that I can finish this book without any big difficulties. >> I am not sure that I fully understood our book, but I am happy that I can finish it without any major difficulty.And, I am looking forward to our next text book.^^ >> CORRECT! Below is the next part of my abstract in English.>> CORRECT! From the conditions of Neo-Confucian restoration, the Coup of 1623 meets two conditions both the former king’s serious mistakes and the servant who tries to take over the throne. >> From the conditions of Neo-Confucian restoration, the Coup of 1623 meets two conditions, which are both the former king’s serious mistakes and the servant who tries to take over the throne. Therefore, without proceeding the third stage, the Coup of 1623 can secure justification as a Neo-Confucian restoration with just meeting the two conditions. >> Therefore, without proceeding to the third stage, the Coup of 1623 can secure justification as a Neo-Confucian restoration by meeting the two conditions. However, this paper will pay attention to the phenomenon that the main group of the 1623 Coup responses the third question by themselves, and it will ask the following question, “Who is the major actor of this 1623 Coup?”. >> However, this paper will pay attention to the phenomenon that the main group of the 1623 Coup responses to the third question by themselves, and it will ask the following question, “Who is the major actor in this 1623 Coup?”.  

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