Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.While many people died in the explosion outside the market, my cousin had a narrow escape because he'd left the market a minute before.
2.Which of these plans would be a pipe dream for most people?
b. playing football for Manchester United
3.During their war of words, Jenny and Ben got angry with each other.
4.We decided to call it a day because we had so much to do.
5.Our football players were sick of being kicked by the other team, so they decided to fight fire with fire and they kicked them back.
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Q2. What this mug cup means?
A2. It means my part-time job. I worked at the coffee shop, where is near by my home in early this year. It was hard, but I could learn how hard to earning the money is, and how can I use the money more wisely, like shopping and saving. And most of all, I was the person who feel difficult to talk to strangers. But after this experience, I feel much better than before when I meet and talk to strangers.
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You're really good to understand what I want to talk.
강사 첨삭
A cold and gloomy Tuesday, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework very well!
I appreciate your efforts and I think it is reflecting on your performances in our class and on your homework!
Keep up the good work! See you later!!
P.S.
Of course, I understand what you wanted to say. Hehe!
We\'re sisters, right? You have a good content in your presentation by the way.
However, take note of the corrections so it will be better to understand in English, okay?
Good luck on your studies too!! Aja!!!
Teacher Carmen ^^
1.While many people died in the explosion outside the market, my cousin had a narrow escape because he\'d left the market a minute before.
>> Correct!2.Which of these plans would be a pipe dream for most people?b. playing football for Manchester United
>> Correct!3.During their war of words, Jenny and Ben got angry with each other.
>> Correct!4.We decided to call it a day because we had so much to do.
>> c. it was getting late5.Our football players were sick of being kicked by the other team, so they decided to fight fire with fire and they kicked them back.>> Correct!
--Q2. What this mug cup means?
>> Q2. What does this mug symbolize?A2. It means my part-time job.
>> A2. The mug symbolizes my experiences in working on a part-time job.
I worked at the coffee shop, where is near by my home in early this year.
>> I have worked in a coffee shop which is nearby my house earlier this year.
It was hard, but I could learn how hard to earning the money is, and how can I use the money more wisely, like shopping and saving.
>> Working was really difficult but through this experience, I learned how hard it is to earn money.
>> I also learned how to spend money wisely and to save it instead of just shopping.
And most of all, I was the person who feel difficult to talk to strangers.
>> And most of all, I am a kind of person who finds it hard to talk to other people.
But after this experience, I feel much better than before when I meet and talk to strangers.
>> But after this experience, I feel at ease whenever I meet and talk to other people.-You\'re really good to understand what I want to talk.
>>You\'re really good in understanding what I wanted to say.
OR>> You really understand well what I wanted to say.
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