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2015-12-15 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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I don't really know about what hackers do. A few days ago, I couldn't open my e-mail. I was in a hurry to go to work but my password didn't match with it.. After working, I troed to call the internet company and they said somebody has changed my password..It was really annoying..Whay are they doing this? For me, they are harmful~~~ 1. Have you seen that movie several times already? 2. Is he leaving tomorrow? 3. Has she been to Greece before? 4. Are they coming at 7? 5. Do they always cheat?

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

I am also afraid of hackers that\'s why I use a complicated password on Facebook.

As for their intentions, I don\'t understand it as well.

They make common people their victims when we have nothing much to offer.

On the other hand though, I think being a hacker is awesome, if we use it correctly. ^^

Thanks for sharing your ideas today!

See you tomorrow!

Teacher Anne

 

I don\'t really know about what hackers do.

>> I don\'t really know what hackers do.
A few days ago, I couldn\'t open my e-mail.

>> Correct!
I was in a hurry to go to work but my password didn\'t match with it..

>> Correct!
After working, I troed to call the internet company and they said somebody has changed my password..

>> Correct! [tried]

It was really annoying..Whay are they doing this?
>> Correct! {Why}

For me, they are harmful~~~
>> Correct!
1. Have you seen that movie several times already?
>> Correct!
2. Is he leaving tomorrow?
>> Correct!
3. Has she been to Greece before?
>> Correct!
4. Are they coming at 7?
>> Correct!
5. Do they always cheat?

>> Correct!

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