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Hi Miss [이름]!
I am also afraid of hackers that\'s why I use a complicated password on Facebook.
As for their intentions, I don\'t understand it as well.
They make common people their victims when we have nothing much to offer.
On the other hand though, I think being a hacker is awesome, if we use it correctly. ^^
Thanks for sharing your ideas today!
See you tomorrow!
Teacher Anne
I don\'t really know about what hackers do.
>> I don\'t really know what hackers do.
A few days ago, I couldn\'t open my e-mail.
>> Correct!
I was in a hurry to go to work but my password didn\'t match with it..
>> Correct!
After working, I troed to call the internet company and they said somebody has changed my password..
>> Correct! [tried]
It was really annoying..Whay are they doing this?
>> Correct! {Why}
For me, they are harmful~~~
>> Correct!
1. Have you seen that movie several times already?
>> Correct!
2. Is he leaving tomorrow?
>> Correct!
3. Has she been to Greece before?
>> Correct!
4. Are they coming at 7?
>> Correct!
5. Do they always cheat?
>> Correct!
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