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2015-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher.^^ I saw the news that a typhoon reached the Philippines. I hope everything is all right with you. Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences. Would you volunteer to be one of the first colonists on Mars if it meant you could never return to Earth? I won't volunteer to be one of the first colonists on Mars. If I can't return to Earth again, that sounds really terrible. I understand that being the first colonists on Mars is an historic one. However, I will have to adjust to Mars's new environment, and this is surely hard things for me. I prefer to a feeling of familiarity rather than a feeling of newness. I would like to travel to Mars, but I don't want to be the first colonists on Mars.

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Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Unlike you, I\'m really into adventures and challenges. I like trying something new. So I would probably agree to be one of the first colonists on Mars. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher.^^ >> CORRECT! I saw the news that a typhoon reached the Philippines. >> CORRECT! I hope everything is all right with you. >> CORRECT! I won\'t volunteer to be one of the first colonists on Mars. >> CORRECT! If I can\'t return to Earth again, that sounds really terrible. >> CORRECT! OR >> It would be terrible if I cannot return to Earth again.I understand that being the first colonists on Mars is an historic one. >> I understand that being the first colonists on Mars is a historic thing. However, I will have to adjust to Mars\'s new environment, and this is surely hard things for me. >> However, I will have to adjust to Mars\'s new environment and this will surely be hard for me.I prefer to a feeling of familiarity rather than a feeling of newness.>> I prefer a feeling of familiarity rather than experiencing something new. I would like to travel to Mars, but I don\'t want to be the first colonists on Mars. >> CORRECT!

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