HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Wow teleportation!
I have always wanted to possess that superpower!
Thanks for doing your homework, Sun Young!
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ESSAY: If you could have any power, what would it be and why?
I would like to have a power of teleportation.
>>I would like to have the power of teleportation.
There are three reasons that I want to have teleportation.
>>There are three reasons why I want to have it.
First, If I can teleport anywhere, I can go abroad anytime I want.
>>CORRECT!
Also, I don\'t need transportation fee.
>>CORRECT!
If I save the transportation fee, I can use it to other parts; food or good accommodations.
>>If I save on the transportation fee, I can use it to other parts like food or good accommodation.
Finally, I can save time to move.
>>CORRECT!
I sometimes feel to waste time, when I move.
>>I sometimes feel like I am wasting time when I move.
I think I will do other things thanks to saving time (or thanks to teleportation).
>>CORRECT!
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