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2015-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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ESSAY: If you could have any power, what would it be and why? I would like to have a power of teleportation. There are three reasons that I want to have teleportation. First, If I can teleport anywhere, I can go abroad anytime I want. Also, I don't need transportation fee. If I save the transportation fee, I can use it to other parts; food or good accommodations. Finally, I can save time to move. I sometimes feel to waste time, when I move. I think I will do other things thanks to saving time (or thanks to teleportation).

강사 첨삭

Wow teleportation!

I have always wanted to possess that superpower!

Thanks for doing your homework, Sun Young!

See you later ;)

ESSAY: If you could have any power, what would it be and why?
I would like to have a power of teleportation.

>>I would like to have the power of teleportation.
 There are three reasons that I want to have teleportation. 

>>There are three reasons why I want to have it. 
 First, If I can teleport anywhere, I can go abroad anytime I want. 

>>CORRECT!
 Also, I don\'t need transportation fee.

>>CORRECT!

If I save the transportation fee, I can use it to other parts; food or good accommodations. 

>>If I save on the transportation fee, I can use it to other parts like food or good accommodation. 
 Finally, I can save time to move.

>>CORRECT!

I sometimes feel to waste time, when I move.

>>I sometimes feel like I am wasting time when I move.

I think I will do other things thanks to saving time (or thanks to teleportation).

>>CORRECT! 

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