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2015-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Yes!! In Korea, there is an unique feeling which is "JOUNG" People from other cuntries may not exactly understand this feeling! For example, we are not family and friends howver we help each other. If I have a child, he is in school. I have to go to school and pick him up but I can't be sure to pick him up on time then my neighbor would help me to pick my son up. and also when we have a hard situation, they will help me.. It is really hard to explain this feeling.. I hope that you visit here and feel this!!^^ 1. I went to the tourist office to get a little information. 2. Kids today spend so much time on the internet! 3. He has a good job and makes a large amount of money. 4. OK, let's do it! But hurry up I don't have much time! 5. I only know a few people in this city.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

We also have that culture in the Philippines.

But it is not as common as before.

When someone is in trouble, neighbors help out.

Nowadays, neighbors have become more distant.

However, we still help each other when we can. ^^

It\'s nice to know our countries share something in common. ^^

See you!

Teacher Anne

 

Yes!! In Korea, there is an unique feeling which is \"JOUNG\"

>> Yes!! In Korea, there is an unique feeling which is called \"JOUNG\"
People from other cuntries may not exactly understand this feeling!

>> Correct! [countries]
For example, we are not family and friends howver we help each other.

>> Correct! [however]
If I have a child, he is in school. I have to go to school and pick him up

>> If I have a child and he is in school, I have to go to school and pick him up.

but I can\'t be sure to pick him up on time then my neighbor would help me to pick my son up.

>> but if I can\'t be sure if I would be able to pick him up on time, then my neighbor would help me pick my son up.
and also when we have a hard situation, they will help me..

>> Correct!
It is really hard to explain this feeling..

>> Correct!
I hope that you visit here and feel this!!^^
>> Correct!
1. I went to the tourism office to get a little information
.
>> Correct!

2. Kids today spend so much time on the internet!

>> Correct!
3. He has a good job and makes a large amount of money.

>> Correct!
4. OK, let\'s do it! But hurry up I don\'t have much time!
>> Correct!

5. I only know a few people in this city.

>> Correct!

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