Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I am interested in taking your class.
2. They enjoy to watching movies.
3. She refuses listening to her mother
4. We agreed to working together.
5. I need to studying.
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Q3. What this picture of lecture means?
A3. I took the lectures of college. It was first time to me to take the lecture of university, and I learned a lot from them. When I was highschool student, every lecture were one-way. Teacher did teach, students did memorize. There were no discussion between them. However the lecture way of college was different. Every lecture was double-way. Professors and students ask and answer to each. It was new world to me. Through this way of lecture, I can extent my think and get more idea in each topics.
Q4. What this car means?
A4. I got the driving license in this summer. At that time, I realize that finally I am a adult. From that, I thought about the duties of adult. And I feel I need to feel responsible at all of my acting.
강사 첨삭
A rainy and chilly Wednesday to you, [이름]!
Thank you for fulfilling your tasks as a student!
Please do take note of the corrections there and I hope that you will learn how to make use of them too!
See you later!!
Love,
Teacher Carmen ^^
1. I am interested in taking your class. >> Correct!
2. They enjoy to watching movies. >> watching
3. She refuses listening to her mother >> to listen
4. We agreed to working together. >> to work
5. I need to studying.>> to study
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Q3. What this picture of lecture means?>> What does this picture of the lecture means?
A3. I took the lectures of college.
>> I was taking classes in the university.
It was first time to me to take the lecture of university, and I learned a lot from them.
>> It was my first time to attend lectures in the university and I learned a lot from them.
When I was highschool student, every lecture were one-way.
>> When I was in high school, every lecture is a one-way process.
Teacher did teach, students did memorize.
>> The teachers will teach the students and the students will just memorize it.
There were no discussion between them.
>> There was no discussion between the teacher and the students.
However the lecture way of college was different.
>> However, it was totally different in college.
Every lecture was double-way.
>> Every lecture is a two-way process.
Professors and students ask and answer to each.
>> The professors and the students can interact to each other.
It was new world to me.
>> It was a new world for me.
Through this way of lecture, I can extent my think and get more idea in each topics.>> I can extend my knowledge and ideas in different topics through this way of having lectures.
Q4. What this car means?
>> What does this car symbolize?A4. I got the driving license in this summer.
>> I got my driver\'s license last summer.
At that time, I realize that finally I am a adult.
>> At that time, I have realized that I am finally an adult.
From that, I thought about the duties of adult.
>> From that moment, I thought about the duties of being an adult.
And I feel I need to feel responsible at all of my acting.
>> And I feel that I need to be responsible of all my actions.
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