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2015-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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1. I am interested in taking your class. 2. They enjoy to watching movies. 3. She refuses listening to her mother 4. We agreed to working together. 5. I need to studying. -- Q3. What this picture of lecture means? A3. I took the lectures of college. It was first time to me to take the lecture of university, and I learned a lot from them. When I was highschool student, every lecture were one-way. Teacher did teach, students did memorize. There were no discussion between them. However the lecture way of college was different. Every lecture was double-way. Professors and students ask and answer to each. It was new world to me. Through this way of lecture, I can extent my think and get more idea in each topics. Q4. What this car means? A4. I got the driving license in this summer. At that time, I realize that finally I am a adult. From that, I thought about the duties of adult. And I feel I need to feel responsible at all of my acting.

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A rainy and chilly Wednesday to you, [이름]! Thank you for fulfilling your tasks as a student! Please do take note of the corrections there and I hope that you will learn how to make use of them too! See you later!!   Love, Teacher Carmen ^^    1. I am interested in taking your class. >> Correct! 2. They enjoy to watching movies. >> watching 3. She refuses listening to her mother >> to listen 4. We agreed to working together. >> to work 5. I need to studying.>> to study -- Q3. What this picture of lecture means?>> What does this picture of the lecture means? A3. I took the lectures of college. >> I was taking classes in the university. It was first time to me to take the lecture of university, and I learned a lot from them. >> It was my first time to attend lectures in the university and I learned a lot from them. When I was highschool student, every lecture were one-way. >> When I was in high school, every lecture is a one-way process. Teacher did teach, students did memorize. >> The teachers will teach the students and the students will just memorize it. There were no discussion between them. >> There was no discussion between the teacher and the students. However the lecture way of college was different. >> However, it was totally different in college. Every lecture was double-way. >> Every lecture is a two-way process. Professors and students ask and answer to each. >> The professors and the students can interact to each other. It was new world to me. >> It was a new world for me. Through this way of lecture, I can extent my think and get more idea in each topics.>> I can extend my knowledge and ideas in different topics through this way of having lectures. Q4. What this car means? >> What does this car symbolize?A4. I got the driving license in this summer. >> I got my driver\'s license last summer. At that time, I realize that finally I am a adult. >> At that time, I have realized that I am finally an adult. From that, I thought about the duties of adult. >> From that moment, I thought about the duties of being an adult. And I feel I need to feel responsible at all of my acting. >> And I feel that I need to be responsible of all my actions.  

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