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Your plan sounds fun!

That\'s why we really have to save money so we can do the things we want ;)

Thank you very much and see you later, Sun Young!

ESSAY: What do you think your life will look like after retirement?
 I dream of traveling around the world.

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 I can\'t go travel now.

>> I can\'t go traveling now.
Because I don\'t have money enough and I need to get a job.

>>I can\'t go traveling now, because I don\'t have enough money and I need to get a job.

If I get a job, I will save money for traveling and then try to go travel abroad and domestic every vacation!

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After retirement, I will plan world tour including countries that I already have been.

>>After retirement, I will plan a world tour which includes countries that I already have been to.

I\'m really looking forward to the day.

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