Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
It's very cold today.
I should wear a thick and warm cloth when I am going out this afternoon.
Take care~~^^
Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences.
If it is after midnight and you do not want to go home yet, where do you go? Why?
This situation feels like a deviance because I am a mother.
However, if I could I would call my male friends, and ask to go for a drink with me.
I want to call my female friends, but they might not come because of their children.
I like to have a talk with a drink because it makes me relieve some stress.
Of course, I would go home not too late. ^^
강사 첨삭
HI Kaylee! Like you, I would also call my friends and grab some drinks with them in a bar. It\'s the only open place at midnight anyway. ^^
Thanks for doing your homework. Well done!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! It\'s very cold today.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It\'s freezing today.I should wear a thick and warm cloth when I am going out this afternoon.
>> I should wear thick and warm clothes when I go out this afternoon. Take care~~^^
>> CORRECT! This situation feels like a deviance because I am a mother.
>> This feels like a deviance because I am a mother.However, if I could I would call my male friends, and ask them to go for a drink with me.
>> CORRECT! I want to call my female friends, but they might not come because of their children.
>> CORRECT! I like to have a talk with a drink because it makes me relieve some stress.
>> I like talking while having some drinks because it relieves my stress.Of course, I would go home not too late. ^^
>> Of course, I won\'t go home too late.
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