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2015-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. It's very cold today. I should wear a thick and warm cloth when I am going out this afternoon. Take care~~^^ Answer the following hypothetical question in not less than 5 sentences. If it is after midnight and you do not want to go home yet, where do you go? Why? This situation feels like a deviance because I am a mother. However, if I could I would call my male friends, and ask to go for a drink with me. I want to call my female friends, but they might not come because of their children. I like to have a talk with a drink because it makes me relieve some stress. Of course, I would go home not too late. ^^

강사 첨삭

HI Kaylee! Like you, I would also call my friends and grab some drinks with them in a bar. It\'s the only open place at midnight anyway. ^^ Thanks for doing your homework. Well done! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! It\'s very cold today. >> CORRECT! OR >> It\'s freezing today.I should wear a thick and warm cloth when I am going out this afternoon. >> I should wear thick and warm clothes when I go out this afternoon.  Take care~~^^ >> CORRECT! This situation feels like a deviance because I am a mother. >> This feels like a deviance because I am a mother.However, if I could I would call my male friends, and ask them to go for a drink with me. >> CORRECT! I want to call my female friends, but they might not come because of their children. >> CORRECT! I like to have a talk with a drink because it makes me relieve some stress. >> I like talking while having some drinks because it relieves my stress.Of course, I would go home not too late. ^^ >> Of course, I won\'t go home too late.

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